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I believe that it is acceptable for hobbits to be treated badly by trolls,even though hobbits are afraid of these pleasant creatures.It is well known hobbits are adventurous and make themselves available for anything risky such as a journey. However,they are beatable when it comes to loyalty to their friends which is not a pleasant aspect.Warrior Hobbits have in the past been appreciated. This must change.” 

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The snow fell. Tom waited.His phone rang when he was in the flat so he picked it up.And started listening.He crossed the room and He picked the suitcase up before he opened the door and went outside.

 

I ate my breakfast,although it was snowing.

 

I fed the shark, after there was an odd sound.

 

I played my trombone when it was scary.

 

I played my music very loudly, since there was no one there.

 

I wore a shirt whenever  there was a bad smell.

 

I gave the frog a helping hand as there was a snake there.

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Bob ran down the road after he fell over.

 

The thunder started as the person walked the dog because she wanted to get soaking wet.

 

The hobbit was in the road because the thunder pulled him.

 

Callum slept in a cage and got stuck because his parents grounded him.

 

The thunder roared and the hobbits ran and hid.

 

The cart came to a wheeling stop and fell in the hobbits home.

 

  

 

 

The Boat of Happiness

The silence on the deck ,

If you stop and listen,

you can hear ,

you can hear the people talking happy,

the boat groans wener  sads.

 

They decorate the boat,

in flower and colour,

they chat about the boat,

and made it beautiful .

 

And you can see the,

the sun set like dying flams,

you can see the hall,

and the most with the mainsail.

 

The dolfing doing a show jumping,

behind the boat was grops of fish.

 

on the ship of happiness the midnight sky glows,

as a diaming shing in the shining sky ,

a net filled with diming fish’s from the sea,

the moon ,which is coming up slowly for the night.

 

 

 

 

 

The ship of stars

The cold wind whistling ,

waves crashing against the ship,

as the boys blue eyes gazed into the night sky,

the pale moon glistening ,

and the stars sparkling,

 

The salty fishy smell of the ocean,

and the loud noise of seagulls,

orcas catching their prey,

as the dolphins dive ,

into the night sky.

The ship of stars

The cold wind whistling ,

waves crashing against the ship,

as the boys blue eyes gazed into the night sky,

the pale moon glistening ,

and the stars sparkling,

 

The salty fishy smell of the ocean,

and the loud noise of seagulls,

orcas catching their prey,

as the dolphins dive ,

into the night sky.

The Rainbow of Masks

The Rainbow Mask Poem by Eva (Lancaster Road)

I wore the pink mask and saw 

a tall cherry blossom tree,

tulips blowing in the wind  and

baby piglets squeaking in joy.

 

I wore the yellow mask and saw 

the burning hot yellow sun ,

daisy moving side to side in the wind and

a lady in a bright yellow dress.

 

I wore the blue mask and saw 

a shiny diamond necklace ,

the big blue ocean and

the calm sky moving.

 

I wore the red mask and I saw 

a shiny red ruby,

a field of fresh roses  and

big red flames moving.

 

The primary coulers (added one)

I wore the red mask and saw

a field of poppies ,

a tomato peeling it skin

and a apple .

 

I wore the yellow mask and smelled

a sourer leomen ,

a primrose forging promises

and a canary singing lullabies.

 

I wore the blue mask and tasted

a blueberry,

a grape

and a babble gum ice cream.

 

I wore the white mask and saw

a barn owl’s face,

a blank bit of paper

and a cloud.

Chapter 3

During the day, Harlow lost hope. She hit the floor and tried to widen a hole in the floor with a tool. She found a window stuffed with wood and a hammer and immediately began to use it. She accidentally dropped it but it didn’t help. She began to panic and shouting for help but Auntie Karen said, “Shut up! There’s no way out!”

 

Harlow was in the room trying to find her own way to escape and she began to get mad at Cara. She said, “Carla, are you going to help? Because it doesn’t look like you are! Please help!”

 

“Sorry, I’ve just lost all hope, we are never going to get out of here…alive at least…”

 

“Oh! Cara, I just remembered there is a trap door,” Harlow whispered to Cara, “But we need to be quiet because if our auntie hears us then she will kill us! Shhhhhh!”

 

“Oh my goodness, this is crazy, but how are we going to pick the lock?”

 

“I have a hammer, maybe we could use that?”

 

“OK, sounds like a plan!”

 

“This might work but I am so sick and tired of our stupid auntie.”

 

Unfortunately, it did not work and the children were stuck.

 

During the night, Cara and Harlow heard a wolf sound and said nervously, “What is that noise? Please say that it’s Charlotte the mechanimal dog?” They both ran to the window and they saw it was Charlotte and she had the key to escape.

 

“That’s the key to open our door but how am I going to get it?” Harlow mumbled. Charlotte jumped up and Cara reached and took the key from the mechanimal.

 

Cara and Harlow sneaked round the room just to make sure there auntie was not watching them escape and to make sure that they were no cameras watching them and they ran to the door picked the lock with the key and they made sure one more time that their auntie wasn’t watching them and they ran like a cheetah outside. They said, “It feels like I have not felt fresh air in weeks, I’m starving. Thank you sooo much for freeing us Charlotte!” 

 

“Woof! It’s ok! Glad you’re safe,” Charlotte said. “Let’s go get something to eat and drink.”

Back from the Beach

I met a girl called Scarlet. 

She had beautiful hair that was as brown as a chocolate bar.

Her beautiful ocean blue eyes searched the skies. 

I kinda fell in love with her because she smiled at me.