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Jack and Maddison’s Great Adventure

Jack and Maddison’s great adventure

 

Waking up from a dream about a cliff, where on the cliff was a tree with a small bottle. In it in the dream they took a journey to the cliff and took it. They had climbed down on a rope.

 

They had woken up, in a snowy forest the one they had fell asleep in. They took the same journey as in their dream. Through the forest and up the hill ending at the cliff. They went straight to the tree and Maddison climbed it. Grabbing the potion, she dropped back to the ground and looked over the cliff. They didn’t realize how high it was from the dream. They started to worry.

 

Suddenly, Jack had realized that he had brought a rope. He tied it to a root stuck firmly into the ground. He let Maddison down first. As she climbed down a couple feet from the ground the rope snapped but because of how close she was to the ground she only got a bruise. Jack had saw that he could walk round but he would have to climb over a fence. After climbing the fence, he looked at the map .

 

DEATH FOREST. In the meantime of getting down they had been separated. In the worst place ever DEATH FOREST. They both walked towards each other. Seeing each other, they ran forwards and hugged each other. They had got lost in the moment not seeing the small creatures coming there way.They had looked at the potion before, and they drank it. Two swords had appeared after drinking the potion. They ran and picked up the swords. They fought for there and each others lives. After winning the fight, Jack had been knocked out.

 

She carried Jack halfway through the forest. As Jack woke up a huge goblin (the boss) had stumbled over to them. He had made a loud sound making then realize it was there. Fighting again they began to get tiered but carried on. They had fought till he was on the ground witch made it easier. Both Jack and Maddison defeated it.

 

It had been early in the morning they had ran out of the forest into a field. Hey stopped to sleep. Waking up from the sun, they ran up the hill to there front door. Knock, knock, knock. There mum opened the door and hugged them. “where were you two all night?!” she enounced “sorry mum we fell asleep in the forest and fought goblins in DEATH FOREST!” they went inside and told there mum the rest (whole) of the story.

 

 

Chapter 4

Instantly, Callumn pulled out a map that included he magical sword was so Callumn and Macie both ventured of in to the forest they went over the bridge and finally saw the castle. Callumn’s plan was to sneak past guards and enter the room were the magic sword would be. So both of them sneak past the guards.
After they sneak past the guards they go in to the room and steal the magical sword. While sneaking back out they got caught.
The guards chase after them. After a while of them chasing they start to hide in a bush. After they think its all clear they start to hear massive footsteps.
It was the monster from the villiage. He was very angry Callumn stabs the monsters and the monster falls down.
The monster dies and Callumn says ” run away from the monster” They both run away to the village.
Whe they arrive at the village and tell everyone what happened there dad promises not to ever leave them alone

Ralph and Dave save the world

It was a sunny day when Dave and ralph went for a walk in the woods. At the side of them were trees and flowers but that was it.  Up the hill along the path was a stand with a shiny pink pearl and a shiny brown stick.  Ralph fell over a big black rock. At the same time that Ralph fell a lot of birds attacked Dave. Ralph stood up with a grazed knee and scared away the birds.

 

Then there dog appeared out of nowhere and again tripped up ralph but this time nothing happened to Dave. The dog disappeared and went under something through the wet mud. Then right infront of them was the stick and pearl so they picked them up and nearly dropped the pearl.

 

They fall into a hole and grass flies in the air. But then they see a lot of zombies and have to explode them and hit them with the stick. Then Ralph thinks of an idea and that was to explode there way out with a pearl.

 

Then they get home to a big party with a banner saying thanks for saving the world your both a star. That night the party carried on  and ended up with a zombie pinyata and hitting them with a stick. Which Dave thought was amazing and so fun.

The locked key

The locked key.

 

Introduction

There is a magical key that has to be found. But the only thing to do is go into the death forest, The death forest is where dead body’s are buried or some people are buried alive. It’s the place with murder, ***** traps and fog, Its not the type of forest to mess in.

 

The sheriff Nottingham

He walked out of the castle with a grin on his face, red eyes with dark black bags underneath his eyes. Here, Wendy was in the middle of nowhere although she thought she was until she turned around, and saw a gun pointed at her only a slight bit of the scope from around a grey castle that was burned down by Germany in 1874 it was covered with moss and vines that was curling over the door. He walked out of the wooden, creaky door, vines blowing in his face, his hair blowing in the wind (now you may be thinking that’s hot but he looked like a frog that hit puberty.) She started running, her shoes falling off, as she fell with her shoes she got back up and kept running, it was getting intense as she stopped to take a breath but the net was already flowing down from the tree. She looked to her right and saw a little mushroom house with personal guards “ why on earth would you guard a mushroom house, ITS IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE” Wendy said fainting to the ground with a big thud.

Here’s where robin hood comes in.

Robin hood looked out his window and noticed Wendy trapped, He swung his door open and barged his guards and tried to help undo before sheriff Nottingham came and shot him alive and get buried. He tried and tried and tried but its didn’t budge, he said “ look, up there a key” she grabbed the key and there was no door. She cut through the rope and they both tried to find a door, At that moment, Robin hood noticed she was barefooted but she backed out he thought that she was being hurt at home but she said it was her dog because when he jumped up she thought he would bite.

 

When the sheriff gets defeated

They walked past him and she got scared and nervous, Robin picked her up and started running, there was a carriage so he jumped in and started driving. Wendy took two big shots and he took one little shot to say “im being easy on you kid go home and do you six thousand word essay”. Robin shot him for good he was dead although they thought.. He came back alive like magic . Wendy shouted “ ROBIN HES BACK”  He shot and shot then eventually died. Robin helped her get home but then there was a bang and she gave the key back.

The locked key

The locked key.

 

Introduction

There is a magical key that has to be found. But the only thing to do is go into the death forest, The death forest is where dead body’s are buried or some people are buried alive. It’s the place with murder, ***** traps and fog, Its not the type of forest to mess in.

 

The sheriff Nottingham

He walked out of the castle with a grin on his face, red eyes with dark black bags underneath his eyes. Here, Wendy was in the middle of nowhere although she thought she was until she turned around, and saw a gun pointed at her only a slight bit of the scope from around a grey castle that was burned down by Germany in 1874 it was covered with moss and vines that was curling over the door. He walked out of the wooden, creaky door, vines blowing in his face, his hair blowing in the wind (now you may be thinking that’s hot but he looked like a frog that hit puberty.) She started running, her shoes falling off, as she fell with her shoes she got back up and kept running, it was getting intense as she stopped to take a breath but the net was already flowing down from the tree. She looked to her right and saw a little mushroom house with personal guards “ why on earth would you guard a mushroom house, ITS IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE” Wendy said fainting to the ground with a big thud.

Here’s where robin hood comes in.

Robin hood looked out his window and noticed Wendy trapped, He swung his door open and barged his guards and tried to help undo before sheriff Nottingham came and shot him alive and get buried. He tried and tried and tried but its didn’t budge, he said “ look, up there a key” she grabbed the key and there was no door. She cut through the rope and they both tried to find a door, At that moment, Robin hood noticed she was barefooted but she backed out he thought that she was being hurt at home but she said it was her dog because when he jumped up she thought he would bite.

 

When the sheriff gets defeated

They walked past him and she got scared and nervous, Robin picked her up and started running, there was a carriage so he jumped in and started driving. Wendy took two big shots and he took one little shot to say “im being easy on you kid go home and do you six thousand word essay”. Robin shot him for good he was dead although they thought.. He came back alive like magic . Wendy shouted “ ROBIN HES BACK”  He shot and shot then eventually died. Robin helped her get home but then there was a bang and she gave the key back.

emilys and ambers advenchur

THE JOURNEY OF AMBER AND EMILY

AT the start of the day, amber and Emily got a letter from the  flamingo king of England.  the letter said “amber and Emily you need to go the the forest to get a magical fish”.it carrys on saying “butt to get into the forest you need to kill the big boss.” It says The fish can be foundin a big puddle of water” said Emily.

Amber and Emily slowly approached the kings castle the king was waiting at the giant metal gate “well well well” said the flamingo king said “what a surprise it is amber and Emily the heros” Emily furiously said “ one we are not heros and second we came here to defeat you!” the king said “well you wont”

After a while the king told them to create him his dinner and he will let the go so amber and Emily created his dinner but put poisen in it and the king died. Emily and amber get out of the castle but they heared some people coming so they hid in a bush but it ternes out that it was just there parents in flamingo outfits and they lived happly ever after ( the magic fish did not exist the king just wanted them to go the castle so they could make him dinner)

THE TAUNT

THE TAUNT

Joe and Liliee was about to go to the castle until they remembered Crystal ( She died in a car fire when she was 12 ) she had dark red hair, purple eyes, and she is a ghost. When they got to the castle, they saw over grown plants/flowers, a lot of moss, dust and cobwebs with spiders. While Liliee was exploring, there was a strange looking door in the hallway, it was a neon blue door, with a semi-circle window at the top, but Lillee can’t see through it because she isn’t tall enough. As she tried to open the door, it appeared to her that it was locked. She checked everywhere, every cupboard, every shelve, and every room, accept the attic but nobody ever goes up there for some reason. Liliee looked through the cupboards, shelves and rooms one more time, but when she was looking in one of the cupboards, she found, a geko? Liliee came out loudly with a name for the geko… TANGY!!

That was what Liliee named it. She finally decides to go up the attic but sadly there was nothing there ( apparently she needed 2 keys, a book and an orb ).

 

Disapointedly, she goes back to her room, until a safe caught her eye. There was a key inside it! She quickly ran back to the enchanted door in the hallway and it opens. There was neon blue leaves and purple branches/ trunk. At the end of the forest was a rusted gate, and next to the gate was a deep hole with a book, another key and a orb. She opened the gate and steped through only to see CRYSTAL! Crystal explained what happened and Lilliee was shocked. Then suddenly, a skelliton popped out of know where and tried to hurt Crystal but Liliee defeted him and Crystal said that Liliee can visit Crystal any time.

THE TAUNT

Joe and Liliee was about to go to the castle until they remembered Crystal ( She died in a car fire when she was 12 ) she had dark red hair, purple eyes, and she is a ghost. When they got to the castle, they saw over grown plants/flowers, a lot of moss, dust and cobwebs with spiders. While Liliee was exploring, there was a strange looking door in the hallway, it was a neon blue door, with a semi-circle window at the top, but Lillee can’t see through it because she isn’t tall enough. As she tried to open the door, it appeared to her that it was locked. She checked everywhere, every cupboard, every shelve, and every room, accept the attic but nobody ever goes up there for some reason. Liliee looked through the cupboards, shelves and rooms one more time, but when she was looking in one of the cupboards, she found, a geko? Liliee came out loudly with a name for the geko… TANGY!!

That was what Liliee named it. She finally decides to go up the attic but sadly there was nothing there ( apparently she needed 2 keys, a book and an orb ).

 

Disapointedly, she goes back to her room, until a safe caught her eye. There was a key inside it! She quickly ran back to the enchanted door in the hallway and it opens. There was neon blue leaves and purple branches/ trunk. At the end of the forest was a rusted gate, and next to the gate was a deep hole with a book, another key and a orb. She opened the gate and steped through only to see CRYSTAL! Crystal explained what happened and Lilliee was shocked. Then suddenly, a skelliton popped out of know where and tried to hurt Crystal but Liliee defeted him and Crystal said that Liliee can visit Crystal any time.

The Castle.

He had disappeared. He was gone. He had disappeared without a trace. Spirit Wood had taken him. The cursed, twisting trees looked still on the outside, but on the inside it was a maze. A maze controlled by cheaters. She had to go find him. She knew the woods were cursed, those who entered never came back, but Fin never believed, he thought it was a myth. A thin, half layer of snow still lay on the ground like a torn blanket. However, despite the cold, she still walked on. She had their supplies, their remaining scraps of food and their spare clothes but Fin had nothing. It was a flat landscape with no landmarks, no way to tell where you were. Everywhere looked the same. Tall trees that reached the sky with a pale, silvery bark twisting and turning. It was all the same until she saw a tree stump and heard a rustling from near bye

 

Quick as a flash she turned around, she swore the scenery looked different, yet she shook it off, she turned to the tree stump again, now there was a strand of something, shimmering in the moonlight. She stepped before it and stole it, she waited in anticipation waiting for something to happen… but it never came. Until she heard a voice, ‘’Ivy, where are you!’’ It was fin and she wasn’t mistaken. ‘’Fin!’’ She screamed before running forwards and falling with a bump. She looked up ‘Fin!’ he was stood right in front of her. ‘’Come on, lets get out of here.’’. They ran towards the lake. Across from it was the moors! Ivy knew what to do, she grabbed the sting out of her pocket and realised, it was never ending. Perfect! She grabbed some spare branches and tied it into a raft. Realising what she was doing Fin helped. Together they pushed it onto the icy water and climbed aboard.

 

Hours had passed, and they had finally reached shore. They had gone down the river to reach the rolling moors. They stared at the scenery around wild cows, bluebells, roses and tons of heather. But they could see their finish line. The castle on the hill. Its shadow looming over the countryside. It was noon by the time they got there, they were stung with nettles and aching for walking for hours. At first they wanted to sleep but they had to push on.

 

They stepped into the gloom of the castle. The door looming in front of them, it was huge whatever creature lived there must have been huge. As if on command, the door clicked open. The children stepped inside, the roof was a glass dome showing the glow of the moon witch couldn’t quite be seen, but they didn’t have time to marvel at the castle since a large creature stepped in front of them. It was tall and skinny, its body lurching to the left and its skin a sickly pale colour. Its eyes blank, yet it knew exactly where there were. Quickly, Ivy grabbed the string out of her pocket and ran circling the creature. ‘Distract it!’ Ivy mouthed. Fin did as she said. Ivy continued to race circles around the demon. Before pulling the string tight. The monster fell to the floor. ‘’Its time to kill!’’ Fin ran to Ivy and looked in the bag, the shining dagger sat in the case, and you can guess what happened next.

Pop and the monsters

Once Pop finished going through the forest of the undead (zombies) he then reaches the 1 million steps to get to the Temple of Sakara to be able to receive the Sacred Flute. Pop is so hungry he decides to run up the 1 million steps to be able to eat well he is used to not eating for ages but not for this long. Pop begins running up the steps but when he runs up 10 steps he is so tired that he falls to the ground and cuts his arms and legs and he has a nose bleed. Pop grabs the bandages that were packed in his bag and wraps them around all his cuts and wipes the blood coming from his nose and walks the rest of the way up instead of running.

Finally, Pop reaches the top of the 1 million steps and walks into the Temple of Sakara and quickly grabs the Sacred Flute and plays it to get a nice black suit that he puts on. Then he creates food and eats it all up very quickly since he has not even eaten a lot over the years. As soon as he eats it all he makes a sink and washes his hands with nice warm water. Pop then notices that the Temple is about to collapse so he runs as fast as he can which is the same speed as his walk and barely makes it out alive. Luckily his suit is fine as he didn’t get it that long ago and really likes it it’s good that he has the map because on that map is the tune that is the only tune that can create something on the Sacred Flute.

Out of the blue Ninja Serpentine begin running up the 1 million steps extremely fast with swords and shurikens Pop spots them and creates a sword and swings it randomly and trips but the Ninja Serpentine catch him. Since the Ninja Serpentine caught him he didn’t bleed again. Pop wriggled out of the grasp and swung his sword and the Ninja Serpentine just stood there laughing a lot at Pop.

Pop keeps swinging his sword and knocks the Ninja Serpentine down but they keep coming back up then Pop realised that they are invincible. He keeps attacking but they keep coming back to get Pop and the Sacred Flute. The battle keeps going on for ages but then Pop has a genius idea he played the Sacred Flute and created a mind control device and mind controlled all of the Ninja Serpentine.

Once he finished controlling the Ninja Serpentine the leader showed up and said that his whole family ratted on him to the Ninja Serpentine. Pop said that he didn’t believe him and mind controlled him and set off to get back home to his five sisters 4 brothers and his mum and dad.

Mystery in the Mist

Concerned, Evie went to find Nia. She was worried so she walked down the hall to find her then she stepped on a wonky tile.  She originally ignored it until she heard something drop so reluctantly turned back to find a small gold coted compass. Slowly, she knelt down to reach it but got an eclectic shock so dropped it. “What is this?!” she exclaimed in pain.

 

Again she picked the compass up but it didn’t shock her. But then she thought of pain and her evil ex-boyfriend. Strangely she fell and saw writing on the back and read North East South West show me where you want to go next. Then she sees something caved on the back of the strange compass that said with anger I give you a shock but with love I hold a power as strong.  “Maybe no no no magic is not real, is it?”

 

At that moment anything was possible and she believed it was true so gave it a go.” Find Nia North East South West show me where you want to go next !“ she said not confidently though.  POOF !!!!!! in a cloud of smoke they were together in a cell though so not so good . On top of that she saw Jack. Jack then said “Nia can go if you marry me ” no make me .

 

Reluctantly, Nia made her , take the plan  . At the church the whole committee of people were confused. What was going on?  Everyone knew, it was even in the news, that he was with her only to get power. Evie wouldn’t want to marry ANYONE, especially not him! Evie reluctantly placed the golden ring on her finger, however, she had a plan. It was the wrong finger; he didn’t know that though… Jack smirked at her. “You look beautiful in white you know.” He said in a sly voice. If he thought that would work, then he was wrong. As soon as the priest had finished saying the vows, Jack grabbed Evie by the wrist and pulled her away from the shocked crowed. Booing and hissing burst from the crowded church. It didn’t help though. Jack and Evie were already far away. Jack pulled her through dense thickets and bushes, scraping her skin and ripping her long, white dress. Then, he stopped…? He stared at the trees ahead. This was her chance. Evie tried to run, however her dress caught on a jagged branch, making her fall onto the moist ground. A smile creeped across mad face. “You shouldn’t have done that…” He murmured. “Now you’ll have to be punished my dear.” Still smiling his grim smile, he drew his bloody sword.

“Wake up!” Eve woke up with a start. Ben was standing over her. Her dream faded. It…….was just a……dream…?

 

 

 

 

Concerned, Evie went to find Nia. She was worried so she walked down the hall to find her then she stepped on a wonky tile.  She originally ignored it until she heard something drop so reluctantly turned back to find a small gold coted compass. Slowly, she knelt down to reach it but got an eclectic shock so dropped it. “What is this?!” she exclaimed in pain.

 

Again she picked the compass up but it didn’t shock her. But then she thought of pain and her evil ex-boyfriend. Strangely she fell and saw writing on the back and read North East South West show me where you want to go next. Then she sees something caved on the back of the strange compass that said with anger I give you a shock but with love I hold a power as strong.  “Maybe no no no magic is not real, is it?”

 

At that moment anything was possible and she believed it was true so gave it a go.” Find Nia North East South West show me where you want to go next !“ she said not confidently though.  POOF !!!!!! in a cloud of smoke they were together in a cell though so not so good . On top of that she saw Jack. Jack then said “Nia can go if you marry me ” no make me .

 

Reluctantly, Nia made her , take the plan  . At the church the whole committee of people were confused. What was going on?  Everyone knew, it was even in the news, that he was with her only to get power. Evie wouldn’t want to marry ANYONE, especially not him! Evie reluctantly placed the golden ring on her finger, however, she had a plan. It was the wrong finger; he didn’t know that though… Jack smirked at her. “You look beautiful in white you know.” He said in a sly voice. If he thought that would work, then he was wrong. As soon as the priest had finished saying the vows, Jack grabbed Evie by the wrist and pulled her away from the shocked crowed. Booing and hissing burst from the crowded church. It didn’t help though. Jack and Evie were already far away. Jack pulled her through dense thickets and bushes, scraping her skin and ripping her long, white dress. Then, he stopped…? He stared at the trees ahead. This was her chance. Evie tried to run, however her dress caught on a jagged branch, making her fall onto the moist ground. A smile creeped across mad face. “You shouldn’t have done that…” He murmured. “Now you’ll have to be punished my dear.” Still smiling his grim smile, he drew his bloody sword.

“Wake up!” Eve woke up with a start. Ben was standing over her. Her dream faded. It…….was just a……dream…?