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Barry stared at the burger . Outside the shattered window , a wind swept across the overpopulated town . Cars purred by and on the promenade , grubby papers tumbled along , driven by the wind . The sea rolled up the bare beach , crashing against the moss – covered rocks that fringed the empty shoreline . 

Barry stared at the burger . Outside the transparent window , a wind swept across the picturesque town . Cars purred by and on the promenade , dancing papers tumbled along , driven by the wind . The sea rolled up the shimmering beach , crashing against the stacked rocks that fringed the tropical shoreline.

Session 8

Blog challenge

Barry stared at the burger. Outside the dirty window, a wind swept across the abandoned town. Cars purred by and on the promenade, ripped papers tumbled along, driven by the wind. The sea rolled up the polluted beach, crashing against the jagged rocks that fringed the filthy shoreline.

Teaching Live Joining Sentances.

Long, long ago there was a poor girl called Polly who had a rusty bike and lived next to the beach. She also had a strange, little cottage. Early one morning, Polly went for a walk to collect shells. She collected flat shells, curved shells and thin shells. Suddenly, Polly found the most beautiful shell she had ever seen which was glistening in the sun lying next to a rock pool! Slowly, Polly bent down to pick up the shell. To her amazement,  the shell spoke!

Blog challenge week 8

Long, long ago there was a poor girl named Polly who lived next to a beach. She had a strange little cottage but she was happy. Early one morning, Polly went for a walk to collect shells. She collected flat shells, curved shells and thin shells. Suddenly, Polly found the most beautiful shell she had ever seen lying next to a rock pool. There was also a rusty bike which was glistening in the sun. Slowly, Polly bent down to pick up the shell. To her amazement the shell spoke.

“ I will grant you two wishes so choose wisely,” said the magnificent shell.

 

Blog Challenge !

Long, long ago there was a poor girl called Polly who lived next to the beach . She had a strange little cottage with a rusty bike but she was happy . Early one morning , Polly went for a walk to collect shells . She collected flat shells , curved shells and thin shells . Suddenly, Polly found the most beautiful shell she had ever seen lying next to a rock pool ! Slowly, Polly bent down to pick up the shell which was glistening in the sun . To her amazement , the shell spoke . “ I will grant you two wishes so choose wisely ! ” said the magnificent shell .

Week 8

 

Long , long ago there was a poor girl called Polly who lived next to the beach with a rusty bike.Early one morning, Polly went for a walk.Suddenly, she found the most beautiful shell and slowly she bent down.

“ I will grant you two wishes so choose  wisely!” But she was happy she didn’t want anything!.To her amazement, she had a strange little cottage which was in the glimmering sun.

Polly and the talking shell

Long,long ago there was a poor girl named Polly who lived next to the beach. She had a strange little cottage and liked to collect shells but she was happy. Early one morning, Polly went for a walk with a rusty bike. Suddenly Poppy found the most beautiful shell she had ever seen lying next to a rock pool. She collected flat shells,curved shells and thin shells. To her amazement the shell spoke. “I will grant you two wishes so choose wisely!”said the magnificent shell. Slowly, Polly bent down to pick up the shell which was glistening in the sun.

Blog Challenge !

Tonight was a night that everyone will remember . It was all 3 things for 8 nights in a row : rain flooding towns and cities ; waves crashing into the shoreline cracking rocks in two and trees falling , crushing animals . Billy wondered what caused this ; Tom didn’t care at all . Billy , who was determined to find out what caused this , told Tom to get up and help him . The grey sky was full of rain-filled clouds . All of a sudden , Billy looked up and saw a massive crack in the sky . . .

Blog Challenge of Suspence

It was the middle of the Storm Xavier.SPLASH BANG!.All the top-of-the-range eye could see was : Fog surrounded by black trees; rain worse than the amazon rainforest and  vicious waves of the tide.Void like sky blocked the sight of a human.A car ,which was low on petrol , tried  its best to get through the aggressiveness of the storm.The waves roared ; they were full of mud.In the distance, a weird shape glided through the water…

Blog challenge

The bus stopped after he sat down.

The storm blew after he got to his house.

The old women jumped as soon as she sat down. She made her way because she had to go home. He sat down at the table before the storm came. He waited for them to arrive before he could take a seat.