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Prologue and Chapter 1

Prologue

 

****** gazed out of the wonky window as the jet-black airship formed closer. He saw the ships daggers shimmering in the sunlight like a tiger aiming at its prey, ready for action. He heard the slam of daggers firing at doors like lions roars. He sensed the firing smell like fogged up air. Flying to its master, ****** roared, By all ticks David humans before mechanicals!

 

Chapter 1

 

Knocking the backdoor of Kennedy Collage for Young Boys, Patrick Hogg glanced across the playground. Not a single person was in sight with him and within a few winks Patrick was now running as fast as he could to read his mystery letter, that he had received 4 days ago. At the end of the long lane at the edge of the town Patrick stopped and took a deep breath like seeing the deep dark woods. He took a seat on an old rusty bench to catch his breath.

 

Once again he opened the mysterious letter and read

                                                                           Dear Patrick

         I am very sorry to say that David Hogg has disappeared ant the airship has been destroyed.

His last words to him were” never tell the future see the future” he never really knew what he meant by that. He went into the woods to find some shelter for sleeping. Last night  he dreamt about the saying that his dad said he kept thinking of what it means.

 

After that moment he heard a familiar growl and a familiar mechanical animal appeared, “By all my ticking its took you a long time to appear”. Patrick spoke  ” who are you, you look very familiar?” YOU DONT KOW WHO I AM!” Said ******. ****** took a breath and said” I’m your fathers mechanical animal he jumped off a cliff without me saying goodbye”. You’re my dad’s mechanical animal! Said Patrick “of course who else would I be ” said ****** well lets go said ******

 

That evening, Jamie was surprised to see Patrick and ******. Standing in the frog hound street. Funny meeting you here oh yes the letter. Jamie took the letter and read the sad news. I am so sorry wait what does, Never tell the future, see the future mean ? Said Jamie ” WHAT DID YOU SAY” said ****** Jamie repeated it again.” Do you know what it means Patrick” said ****** Patrick shook his head oh let me tell you he means the special rock he kept in his drawer he meant sees the future but never tells it, that rock he said it was from the beach said Patrick well come on lets go find it before the scaly dogs get their dirty paws on it.

 

SNULL

THE SNULL

 

The snull is a legendary creature that is called an amphibian.

The snull was thought to be extinct after scientific experience,

It was soon thought not extinct. However, after those couple of years not knowing the snull was alive, the island started to disappear. The snull is very special creature, because the horns of the snull are very strong stronger than anything in the world.

 

The snull has a snake scaled body and the middle part in its body is fluff from the bulls fur. The snulls tongue is 190cm this gives it an advantage of it catching its prey which is flies, fish, mice, leaves, rabbits and rainbow eaters it also uses its horns to dig into its preys guts. It’s hooves are very fierce the skin also peels off on the hooves to make them grow faster. The snull’s ears are very good at listening. Sadly, the snull is supposed to live for about 1000-2000 years but has now only living for 500 years because of climate change it is disappearing.

 

The snull moves about 10,000 miles per hour. Furthermore, the snull

Is 100 meters long and 100x bigger than a human and very thick.

Its only friends with other snull animals and Elle-Draffs and herbie beetle and bunnyfly and ladypig and the drake. The snull lives on the deadly side of Neverbelieve in a jungle called deadly town. The only thing that eats this creature is HUMANS humans slice the up on the longest stove in the world and cook the for tea lunch or breakfast but 3% of the world can find snulls. 

 

When the snull goes in the water the legs zap into its body, and its snake body slithers along the rivers, ponds, lakes and the sea.

When the snull comes out the water the legs pops out of its body and starts walking. The  fur in the middle dry’s really quickly as soon as it gets out the water. The snull helps the planet by picking up the litter and putting it in the bin. It also bites people who are cutting down trees. The snull is also very dangerous and never go and pet the SNULL.

 

Blood Trail Flower(session 3)

 

Blood Trail Flower

 

Blood trail flower has flexible vines stretching 

for nearby gates, the colour shading in the 

evening sun.

The roots crawling down like worms digging

deep down, into the rough ground.

The stem shoots up like a shooting star

flying into the sky, and the colour like green 

Flowing grass.

The leaves growing freely in the screaming wind,

and there  sharp fingertips stab you like knifes!

The petals shimmering like stars at the midnight

Strike, petals falling down leaving drops of rain like

tears.

The pollen shining like blinding summer suns, its pollen

Bright yellow bees landing on it.

 

By Luisa  Hogg

The Adventure

 

I met a frog called Jumper.

His skin was as green as grass,

As smooth and clean as water

Jumping madly into the casual calm pool.

 

I met a boy called Flame.

His skin was as hot and as red as a burnt tomato,

His hair was pure amber flames crackling above his head

He was dressed in sunlight his shoes burnt to pieces.

 

I met a jaguar called Jaspar.

His teeth were as sharp as a dagger chewing at its bloody pray,

Its skin was as fluffy as cotton candy its pink hair shined in the darkness

It ran as fast as the wind its claws digging into the ground getting as dirty as dirt.

Speedy horse

Today id choose a horse, as brave and elegant as can be id bolt through the meadow as quick as a flash my flaxen tail flying freely

My hooves thundering through the grass as mighty as a dagger, my jet-black body as smooth as silk shining in the evening sun

My scarlet blue eyes scanning through the wind my long jaggy eyelashes covering for shelter, the rain dancing down to the ground.

Mysterious Adventure

In the land of Neverbelieve, I saw a deadly dragon gliding down from the sky like dancing confetti flowing down slowly as a snail moving.

 

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I found a shimmering small crystal hidden upon rocks snoozing as the light faded away the rocks became lighter and started fading  to see more dazziling crystals a peering slowly.

 

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I heard a thundering bolt snoring quickly as the sun was going away as the glittering moon a peered like a alive banana.

 

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I tasted cotton candy melting away like ice melting in the sun in a cold glass of water. 

 

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I captured the feeling of spiders digging into my golden heart tears dripping down from my eyes spiders digging down deeper and deeper like dogs finding bones.

 

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I collected a jet-black scaly creature crawling on my hand sharp claws buried into my bony back the creature was like a lion eating bones from a deer.

the vamp bat

THE VAMP-BAT

The Vamp-Bat is a remarkable species that has only recently been discovered. Its Capabilities have made it renowned amongst the scientific community. Would you ever recognise one and what do we need to know about its impact on the world.
This creature has legs a tail and is similar to other living creatures. The bulk of vamp- bats possess four legs which enable them to jump from tree to tree ,though a minority have been seen with as many as eight legs allowing them to jump much longer distances to attack their prey. In the main they are the size of a large dragonfly they have eyes that shine like a pinhead when focusing, shockingly they have the ability to spin their head 360 degrees to see in all directions.
The vamp-bats body is camouflaged and covered in a fine soft hair like a hamsters they have strong and dangerous arms that can grip like nutcrackers around a walnut. They can squeeze under locked doors and even into boxes. This is concerning because when cornered or frightened they will attack humans with a venom that is stored in its long tail which feels like a witches finger stabbing into your skin. Alarmingly their poison is so powerful tht once in your body you can bleed rapidly from the world so beware!

fang zilla

Fang zilla

The fang zilla is an special form of insects that has only recently been discovered. Its powers have made it renewed amongst the scientific  community . would you even recognise one and is there anything more, do you know how to find it .Its is like most ************** the way it has 4 legs , it dose not have any wings but floats! The majorty of the fang zilla has one venom tail that’s goes into your skin and turns your blood green.

However, there are many a few are around but 4 people had seen it. There are very large and when hungry they will make your house fall down when it gets hungry. The fang zilla body is multi-pattern and covered with vemiom that was black. Weirdly, they can camouflage    on anything and this means  they can go on anything when they want. They can squeeze under locked doors and even into boxes! Its censuring  because when concerned or frightened, they will attack you! Be were

 

The secret Emporium

Chapter 4-the return

Not paying attention that the loud voice rang her ears , cosmina paused where she was sure that the door must have roughly been standing. The was no door there in fact there was a small wishing well that been invisible joining the lush trees. It was a unusual brown with the burning fire smell that burns her nose braking there unsteady  surface .

 

Lush green weeds grew on the rims of the wishing well. Peering into the crystal clear water, she could just see what it looked like the shape of the door at the clear bottom.

 

Immediately she cleared out the well. Cosmina had expected it to be iced but actually boiling water. Expectantly that winter she had worked very hard at the rock climbing lessons. Mrs. smith said I could be very good at rock climbing I just need to put more effort into it, no more feare!. She could hear the sound of the loud footsteps coming to her so fast. Cosmina went slowly and slowly as she went down the hollo  wishing well. Down,down though the creepy wishing well towards the outline of the door at the bottom of the well. Her heart thudding  in her chest in her chest. Suddenly, she was panking  but her heart raced even more grasping the door, she yanked the door handle. With out a flash as if she was nearly at the bottom of the well, she shot though the door and the corridor  became thinner and thinner was she walked. She was back in the emporium but really none the wiser . what happened!

 

Carefully, she walked back, pulled open the curtain and stepped into the shop, professor snap gazed  at her,

“ah,I see you came back to us did you find what you were looking for” cosmina shook her head.

“ the thing is”, professor, “you can visit many wonders but the past cannot be undone, so we don’t always find what we expect, still, the always another day”, he  placed the large octopus toy that he was playing with, made him smile,

“come again another day”, he said holding the door open. Cosmina stepped out the daylight then,  she wanted to find out loads more , slowly she turned around. But the professor snap and the fantastic brown emporium gone with out a blink.

 

It dissapered as if it was not a thing anymore. She felt quickly the shiver of magic and shattered.

 

Maybe tomorrow, she thought to her self as the walked home. Maybe tomorrow.

What she did not notice the sloth was on the lush tree was following her.

 

magical Emporium

It was an appealing, brick cottage with blossom, lush back garden and tulips growing up from the grass and making a entrance to the door. The door was open with out really  thinking about it, she stepped inside. Her core starting thrashing gladly. The house had everything you might need; a comfortable luxurious sitting room with recliner sofa and wood crackling burning fire; a tiny Syrian hamster  running in its wheel. had two shiny cups and plates with china dolls set.

 

“hello, “spoke cosmina, wondering if anyone else was there. But she was met by silence. She made her way. there was no one in the darkened kitchen  ,though the  kitchen were made up with deep-coloured pans and cups, for a moment she wondered….

 

 

She had had thrown into her drawing. One thing she craved and didn’t seen as if that was going to come true. There was no sighn of the sloth  she never saw her sloth but she was not sure if he was there. I didn’t feel right. Then she heard it…

Something downstairs; something moving and it wasn’t exactly using footsteps. It was strange stepping noises accompanied by low buzzing. She glanced up the stairs, plucked up courage and ascendant step-by-step, trying to keep it dead nothing moved. Only the noses from the telephone still rang. A moment later, wide open. It  was   then when she eye contacted; it was a over-shadow forehead; and a sharp razor knife lacerate the flooring. There was no hesitation this time. Cosmina shoved the cottage door open and fast as her legs could carry her, she dashed back up the pathway, though the forest and towards where the door had been.

But there was nothing there no door, nothing more than a woodland and extending   unendingly working, cast down with a outline and appearance and vague moved out a meaning

“coming back”, growled a voice behind her