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The victory command continues H

The battered Victory Command was coming down at lighting speed. It was hailing and the mist was all over. They woke up in horror, when the gigantic engine had collapsed. They all had fear in their faces hanging on for dear life.

All of a sudden , there was a massive boom. They landed on a deserted island, there was no one there just lots of colossal trees with big lushes’ leaves. The sand was burning hot. They didn’t know what to do. They were stranded. They couldn’t get back.

Crash landed

Wrecked in fear, Jack and Elizabeth bit their lip whilst slowly pulling the water-loaded piece of wood of their aunt’s leg so she could be free. They had no clue where they were: no maps, no mobile phones, no nothing. BOOOOOOOMMMMMMM!!!!!!! They ran and hid behind a bush. Their minds were running at 1000 miles an hour. What was that noise? Was it the engine that exploded? Or another sky ship nearby? Lots of stuff was going through their minds like how they were going to get back and how long were they going to have to stay here for? This island, which they had crash landed upon, was very big and had lots and lots of colossal, lushes’ trees. They were so nervous as they had nothing to protect them and no shelter. They were so scared; were they going to survive on this deserted island?

The Victory Command

You’ve probably been on a sky ship in the glorious sun shine. Remember how it felt, to have the breeze flowing through your hair and keeping the ships heart warm and friendly like a cute and fluffy puppy. I bet you’ve enjoyed seeing all the different places all around the world and all the crazy creatures you have come across on this magical adventure.
But you should also try a trip on a sky ship in the most dangerous weather possible; when the heavens open and rain, hail and snow all fall at the same time. When the most dreadful hail falls on to the Victory Command, it sounds like volcanic rocks shooing from the nearest eruption. When the crew cling on for dear life and the ship shakes continuously (like an earthquake with a magnitude high on the richter scale). That’s when sky ship exploration can be terrifying.
And some say they have seen corrupt phoenixes, skulking above angry storm clouds waiting to ambush their next victim. You probably won’t believe this but some say, that there are flying creatures with teeth as sharp as a woodcutters’ axe that could bring down even the strongest sky ship oak structures, and whose fiery breath like a deadly inferno that could burn through the sky ships strongest ropes.

 

The Victory Command
Hail, like volcanic rocks, beat down on The Victory Command. Elizabeth bit her lip as she tightly squeezed her arms around the mast. She looked across at Jack who seemed to be remaining calm, despite the traumatic situation. After leaving Weymouth a week ago, they had settled into their new home for the next 4 months with ease, until this storm had rolled in.
Out of the blue, corrupt phoenixes, that lurked in nearby storm clouds, ambushed the sky ship. Their high-pitched screeches could be heard from miles away and deafened the crew of The Victory Command. Aunt Betty, the captain of the ship, turned the rudder abruptly left and right, steering the ship between the violent phoenixes. The phoenixes, ablaze, continued their relentless attack on the vessel. The ship began to sink. The siblings looked up. Above them, they could see the air escaping from the Dragon’s skin balloon, which had been sliced by the phoenix’s sharp beak.
The ship was descending at lightning speed. And then, suddenly, to their horror, there was a massive BBBOOOOOMMMMMM!! The window in their room was smashed and they could just about fit through it so they climbed through and went to find their aunt.

 

10 Things i would take on a sky ship adventure

An old tea-stained book that grants you wishes in seconds when you open it.

A shiny, diamond sword ready to fight the most dangerous dragons in the world.

A book only for the worst beginners (ME)

A disgusting smelling potion to chuck a goblins in a mighty fight.

An old rustic pocketknife to protect yourself from any dangerous creatures that will attck you.

An ordinary bag which you think is normal when it actually isn’t becase it never ends so you can catch anything you like in it.

A pair of enchanted boots to float in th sky like an airplane.

A toy play house which EXPLODES into a giant mansion to catch the mighty creatures on the way.

A cosy fur-lined jacket to keep me warm in whatever weather.

Maizie’s Dragon poem

Maizie’s Dragon poem
The blood colour dragon swooping around the city waiting for its prey to come out of their houses.
The bony dragon this as paper destroying the tiny village in a beat of a heartbeat.
The beady eyes had a mischievous look.
The old aging jaws ready to eat you in a second.
The long tongue, ready to swoop you up quicker than a heartbeat.
The dragon’s scales so clear that you can see you reflection but you haven’t got time to look, QUICK RUNN!!
The children think dragons are creatures which aren’t real and are only in fairy tales well they are wrong, stay in your houses, there is a dragon on the way.
The dragons fiery and stinky breath you could smell from 10 miles away.
The humongous dragon swooping every animal up it can find.
The big ferocious dragon came stopping down the street destroying all the houses like a tsunami.

What Are You?

What Are You?

You are a winter wonderland, glistening in the snow.

You are the smell of a milkshake, with its juices flowing around you.

You are a Sunday morning, waking up with a grin going from ear-to-ear.

You are a baby sitter caring for the children, when, all of a sudden, you hear a silent scream.

You are the impossibility of making a dream come true.

You are a giraffe, with you long neck as high as a sky scraper.

You are a giant monster crashing through Brixham, like a tsunami.

You are a beagle galloping, as fast as you can, down the high street to get away from a person trying to catch you.

You are a jockey heading towards the finish line, thinking you’re going to win when, all of a sudden, another horse shoots past you.

Sunset

 

You are the yellow and orange mixed like the sun set.
You are as beautiful like the sunset going around the world.
You are as fascinating as the sun going away (also known as sunset.)
You are as big as the sun before it sets.
You are ice cream staying the same because you are watching the sun set on your roof.
You are on fire like the sunset.
You are the sun star in the midnight sky.

Summer day on the beach

You see the birds attacking the bright blue sea

You smell the fresh sugar donuts coming of the cooker

You touch the dry bright hit sand

You taste clucked dough ice cream in the hot summers

You hear the waves crashing and bashing the people swimming

The fairground

In the creepy rundown fairground is laying a nest of killer dolls.

On the Ferris wheel it was full of dust rust.

The Ferris wheel is like the ring of Saturn.

The waves that crash as each and every time a gust of wind flew by.

The fairground that was abandoned many years ago stands alone as it rusts away.