Dear Athena,

I am writing to persuade you to come to fairy land and fight crime with me.My first point is the crime gets worse and worse each day in Fairy Land.I would also like to add that it will get more dangerous if you d0n’t come.Furthermore,I am concerned that if you don’t come the town will be destroyed.To build on this concern,I would suggest you come right away before it’s too late.I would like to point out that the recent studies have said that this town has lots of crime.On the other hand,many people argue that people like you can’t be heroic enough.Some people claim that crime is rising here because people aren’t safe enough here because this is very serious.Although some people suggest that working together is a bad idea,I don’t think it is.However,the town council aren’t so happy if you visit.Alternitavely,you can visit people in  schools or their home and say what you can doand how to support our local police.The main reason for this is because crime will get lower and lower and people will know what to do in a situation like this.We believe this because our town will be safer than now.

Thank you for reading this letter!

From artemis(Goddess name).

Hardly daring to breathe,Rose walked into the abandoned carnival.At that moment,she heard ear aching roars in the darkness.Petrified,she flicked open the switch of her flashlight and shone it around her, investigating what that creature or thing was that made the noise.Outside, the carnival cardboard cutouts fell mysteriously to the ground.Inside,the food had been eaten by a siliware looking figure.Something or someone wouldn’t stop following her.

At that moment,someone creeped into the abandoned carnival.Silence seemed to keeps it’s place;nothing dared to move.Lights flickered on;whoever had entered started to move.

Somebody shifted chairs and began to investigate.Risking a glance,Rose saw a dark shadow running and disappeared in thin air and felt a scary feeling go through her.

An unkown figure tucked in a unctucked chair.Shivering,she cuddled a soft,fluffy teddy bear.They could escape once the stranger left.

It was a freezing afternoon in November.The cold spread all over the town.Frost formed,making a wave of ice over the buildings and streets of Bolton.But a shadow flashed and disappeared as quickly as it could.The weather had turned worse and worse each minute.Rose tugged her hat as a wave of wind blew.The cold spread across roof tiles,the shiny windows of a skyscraper and broken bricks  shattering loudly.The park was already closed.Apart from the thunder in the stormy sky,it was silent……very silent.

Rose michelson ignored the fog.She was staring at the checkpoint in her way.She tugged her hat on her head,covering her shiny blonde hair as a gust of wind swept all over Angel’s street.

She could see an army looking man dressed in green and black inspecting people’s items.A line of people huddled closely like penguins,waiting for their turn.Rose watched as many of them were declined and their faces full of disappointment.On the other side of the border had everything cleaner and luxurious.Not like this side where everything was dirty and disgusting.

”Well hurry up then!I ain’t got all day kiddo!Shouted the soldier very impatiently.He waited as rose got her parcel out.”And where is a little girl like you going on a windy day like this?”he asked with a weird face looking further to inspect Rose’s worried face.”I’m delivering some toys to my dad’s business,”Rose replied,doing her best to look happy and honest.The guard looked down at the large parcel Rose had brang,he raised his eyebrows,tapped his foot and nodded his head.

A few minutes later,Rose was looking along the shining,clean streets of West Bolton.Here veryhting was litter free ,shop signs shining and people wandering happily as they went to stores.Oh how Rose was desperate to live here,having this amazing life unlike in her own town feeling poor and like a dirty slave.

Taking a shortcut down Silver’s Alley,Rose turned her head down scared to catch someone’s eye.Head turned down keep out of trouble.Her mother repeated irt many times.

She bumped into a man she had never met,rapidy approaching grabbing her hand and pulling her into the darkness of the Alley.

I’ll be having those,” he said grabbing Rose’s parcel.There was a stop.”Plus any money you have.”Rose ducked down and slapped the mon on his face and ran up the alley,running quietly down a railing.But the end was blocked by a metal wall.

The man’s shadow started to appear from the dark towards Rose.It seemed to stretch out holding Rose withit long arms.Rose was shocked.She saw the mans glittery eyes with greed as he went a step close,towards Rose.Then she saw a small door behind a pile of rubbish,A moment later,she was inside.

I look around with my wide,cyan eyes and chomp on my snack.

I squak as loud as a fox’s scream.

I’m a food-lover,tail-twitcher.

I’m a nest-builder,sky-flyer.

I’ll fly around the rainforest searching for a delicious delicacy.

I’ll skulk back to my nest like nobody was ever there.