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The story of Pipkin-Amelia

The sun hardly shone through the rainy clouds when Pipkin rose from his sleep, he rubbed his eyes as he went to look out the stained windows. He gasped as he noticed the gorms footsteps in the muddy, sticky forest floor. He was horrified so he ducked down behind the wall as he shaked anxiously. He calmed himself down and went outside to explore the footsteps. As he got to the footsteps he heard thumping coming his way so he quickly got up and ran behind a tree, as he ducked down he noticed the gorm coming past, as soon as he had the chance he sprinted past to the other tree he spotted. As he was running he tripped over a log and fell, he noticed the gorm was coming so he quickly got up and started running again. He eventually got to the cottage and was safe, well for now.

The starter of Podkin!

Podkin opened his eyes in the middle of the night to a shocking feeling in the bottom of his brain. He felt strange, out of control. It was almost as if he was hypnotized his great big green eyes glowing in the dark, shining as he feels wobbly, very wobbly. He looks around his room no one is there. It is just Podkin. Alone he wonders if one of his siblings had pranked him, or was it one of his deadly predators striking back. Wait…Podkin is getting sleepy, he is asleep, now it is only his mind that is with him, is he even alive at this point?

The starter of Podkin!

Podkin opened his eyes in the middle of the night to a shocking feeling in the bottom of his brain. He felt strange, out of control. It was almost as if he was hypnotized his great big green eyes glowing in the dark, shining as he feels wobbly, very wobbly. He looks around his room no one is there. It is just Podkin. Alone he wonders if one of his siblings had pranked him, or was it one of his deadly predators striking back. Wait…Podkin is getting sleepy, he is asleep, now it is only his mind that is with him, is he even alive at this point?

BLITZO

BLITZO

the fire from the rally was glistening in the early morning sun and Blitzo just sat in waiting for his employee’s to come to work he glanced at his daughter she glanced at him he sighed and got up he looked in the mirror they red of the skin shon in the heat.

 

 

Meet The Characters

Character:

A shadow of a girl standing in the window, between the trees, which was in Weeping Woods and her dad was outside racking up leaves who was dressed in a white t shirt and farmers dungarees (which were a dark blue colour).

 

Setting:

It was another day in Weeping Woods it was a cold, snowy night everybody who walk pasted was shivering because it was that cold nobody could stay still not for even a second. Werewolves were howling because it was a full moon and it was like a really dark blue so nearly black that is why the girl’s shadow was showing so clearly.

outside and inside

April, who had just been recently been chased by the gorme hid in the goblin kingdom the goblins did not like the gormes so April hid their knowing the gorme would not check their or they would die by the goblin April ran when a goblin spotted her she ran as fast as she could and hid so then the goblin would look like a fool because it would look like he was the one running from someone so he would make a fool out of himself and he would hide from public.

 

Outside was snowing as big as a storm no one could see only the gorme could see so they all hid and hoped not to die April meanwhile could only hear screaming of the ones that got caught.

podkin

Podkin woke up really early to get food from the dinofrog palace, the only way to get in was to jump from the roof of the shed to the top of the castle. He managed to get in through an open window on the second floor he sore a lot and a lot of jewels stood in front of him but he carried on trying to get food for his siblings. He causally ran down the thin dark alley way until he got to a food stall. He stole mangos, strawberries and other fruit and sandwiches and warm hot chocolates, he shoved everything in his bag and went the same way he got in but all of a sudden drunk solgers walked in front of him, “what are you doing little lad?”, questioned the drunk solger, you could hardly see his face because it was covered in the darkness of the alley. He tried to run away but he realised that there was a dead end he had nowhere to go he sprinted up the castle wall, when he got over the wall he ran straight into the castle wall. And got back to his sibling to eat up.

Description of Podkin

 

Podkin, who is a rabbit has lost one ear from a terrifying battle,he has brown brittle hair which is caused by living in the forest. They were always scared of the Gorm the Gorm has horns as sharp as a knife and a blood filled mouth.  Podkin had 3 siblings called pipkin,posco and prew they all was scared of the wildlife they missed their mum and the lovely meals they had to steel to eat!

 

The family had been staying in a stick fort which they made under trees trying to hide from predators in the morning the sun rose and peered from the clouds it looked like a ray of sunshine. At midnight the owls and birds were hungry which was scary for the rabbits. At midnight they burrowd and closed it at the top all the stars came out when the Milky Way rose.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Description of the Gorm

Description of the Gorm

 

The Gorm were terrifying, they had sharp, pointy horns, sharp teeth covered in blood, their eyes were as red as magma and they glowed as bright as headlamps. They had deadly, pointy spikes on their back, no one would go near.

They marched across the dark, gloomy forest, which went on for miles. Trees stood as tall as mountains, rocks clung on the sides of hills and crystals stumbled to the surface. Moss covered the ground, while rabbits sprint away in fear because the Gorm has now taken over their once beautiful home.

Outside or Inside

Harrison, stared at a smelly empty stalls for horses, a big ancient door and a crack between the roof tiles then he could smell a rusty smelly water in a bucket. Harrison, can hear a wind moaning and the snow swirling round the window. He had to tell us something but it was hard to speak all he could smell was a gross horses plie in a rusty bucket on the ground that was scattered but when he walked in the door there was a creaking on the floor.

Harrison, is going out to his friend’s house but when he went out all he had heard the old ancient rusty door was creaking that was waking his mum up he had to run back to his room then his mum went to bed so he tried again when he got there he had fun there was snow and he was going to make a snow man he asked to his friends is that ok? Yes you can go make a snowman we will be there is a min then we went back in the house.