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The abandoned, haunted water park

Patrick dashed down the brown, creaky stairs. Patrick ran as fast as a cheater but where was he going? He sprinted out the door and ran  down the hill,  he finally stopped at the abandoned, haunted water park. Then he entered the abandoned water park. It had very rusty, dirty slides and snapped trees. Patrick was shocked and it also smelt disgusting.

The abandoned water park

Patrick entered the spooky, abandoned water park and he heard a very loud scream, it sounded like a little girl. Patrick sensed something and it smelled like there was a fire going on. He was scared that the girl was being burnt and he was shaking.