Suddenly, in the grey darkness they heard gun fire and then a plane shot out from clouds and fired missiles. The Stargrazer was shattered into atoms and Ty fell to his death. But Mariana and captain O’shea survived the explosion…
Suddenly , Ty , Mariana and O ` Shea heard a nerve shattering sound. Then Ty started to feel terrified because he saw a mysterious dragon! Mariana was racked with fear. The dragon went underneath the Stargrazer. They all peered underneath the ship then . . . The creepy looking dragon smashed the Stargrazer into pieces!
All of a sudden they heard a massive grumble noise it got louder louder and louder even though they were in deadly silent. ” Marina we need to jump you go south board I’ll go port in 3 2 1 go! “They cant hear thing in the sky their was clouds everywhere . They hit the floor they landed on a mountain a snowy mountain . They got on a tour boat and headead to safety …..
At first a noise below them started crackling. Over the deep dark sea, hundreds and hundreds of creepy noises started below Ty and Mariana . In the distance there was a massive wave, Ty shouted “A Tsunami!” Mariana duked and Ty was shaking in fear. BANG SLASH BOOM, lightning shot out the air. A noise got closer and closer, SKKRR the ship started to vibrate. WHHHOOSH, a Three headed dragon with a tail like a snake leapt out the deep ocean and crushed the Stargrazer into pieces.
All of a sudden, dragons started burning the Stargrazer then Ty shouted “Mariana you go port I’ll go starboard” then the ship started to rock. Then suddenly the ship exploded! They landed in the sea with the dragon still after them. As it got darker they stared building a new ship. Next morning they set backup in the sky.
The Stargrazer started plumeting. Captain O”Shea shouted ” we are going down crew!, get ready for a crash landing!” Mariana and Ty looked at each other confused , Mariana went port, and Ty went starboard. For a second, all they saw was the- deep- blue- Ocean.
The ship hit the surface with a BLATTER! the crash was so hard, that it would be lucky to survive. Ty and Mariana floated unconscious in the Ocean. Captain O ” Shea was the only one that was strong enough to remain conscious.
I think their is amazing vocabulary and really good adjectives .
I also think that she could of put a few more words in her blog she also could of put some more descrinbing words for her dragon
- A magical, sparkly, golden ring to suck the mysterious scary dragons in the Dimond.
- A frog but not just any frog, an glow in the dark, dragon catching frog.
- A camouflage army print coat to hide from my predators.
- A torch to blind the dragons and other animals who want to eat me.
- Warm clothes to keep me warm if the weather is bad.
- Shelter to keep me dry and safe if it rains or if it is dark.
- A photo of my family incase I miss them.
1. I would take an invisibility cloak from Harry Potter,
2. I would take water and food,
3 .A magic ring that go turns in anything,
4. A poisonous weapon,
5. A warm coat to keep me warm,
6.Magic sunglasses that give me eye vision,
7.A magic water bottle so I can make anything out of the water,
8.A special bag so you can pull anything out of it.
1. I would take a lantern to light the way on the long journey.
2. I would take some of my favourite foods and a ginormous bottle of water to fill my body.
3. I would take map to guide the way so I do not get lost.
4. I would take some of my clothes to keep my warm on the adventure.
5. I would take my pet a springer spaniel called Jess to keep me company.
6. I would take my phone to message my family so they do not miss me.