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On My Way Home

I met a prince that came from the mystirious galaxy of Andromeda. He was called Echo. He had all sorts of echos and in his mouth you could see magestical, transparent drops falling in to water and repeating over and over again. When we shouted in the mountains hoping to have echo back, he was the one who responded from the depths of space.When we shouted in the Iceland mountains with sprinkling snow on top,his mecanisme twirled  and twirled and the vibrations entered the snowy mountains as the snow topled on the people to cause certain death.        

On My Way Home

I met a boy called Forest

trees sprouted from his head

and ivy grew around him from head to toe

everytime he stepped there was a crunch like the sound of leaves

his emerald eyes were mysterious

earth scattered everywhere wherever he went

 

I met a girl called Ice

she can freeze you to death

Every one she touched

turned into rock solid ice

 

On my way home…

On the way home ,I met a boy called Rich. He was riding high on his stallion, with hundreds of servants following behind him.He was wearing extravagant clothes made from the finest,imported silk.

On the way home , I met a girl called school.She was very boring but on the other hand she was also very smart and intellegent .I learnt lots of facts from her.

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On my way home, I met a boy called Happiness.

He had a smile on his face wherever he went.

He had eyes like sun reflecting on a river.

He bought joy to everybody’s hearts.

 

 

 

The promised Candyland

in the promised Candyland    i saw a giant candied chocolate apple being eaten by a 6 year old child getting a sugar rush.

In the promised Candyland i saw a  colossal candy cane being  destroyed by a liquorice monster.

I saw the promised Candyland be destroyed by demonic Liquorice builders

in the promised Candyland saw a despicable  skittle  eating some m”n”m

In the  promised  candyland    i saw a haribo eating some chocolate

In the promised candyland i saw a  twinke  eating a Brioche in a bowl of cereal

in the promised candyland i saw a  oreo eating a bowl of kitkat cereal

in the promised candyland i saw a  sugar bird eating a  demonic liquorice worm  and a doughnut bear  filed with  a gooey steaming hot jam filing

 

the skies and sea combimed

In the land of Never believe,I found a spiky,fragile cactus caught in a thunderstorm. In the land of Never believe,I saw the crystal,glass sea as clear as a diamond the sky giving it that luxurious shade of a light,ethereal blue.In the land of Never believe,I saw the water flowing with elegance and delicacy like they were dancing on the sand with the seashells,jelly fish and starfish.In the land of Never believe,I sung on shore with gentleness and softness.In the land of Never believe,the mists flew above my head.They looked like fluffy,white cotton balls in the sky.In the land of Never believe,I pranced around on the beach shore the aquamarine water reaching my foot.The scene was..delucent.The mineral particles put a wash of  joy over me as i gazed up at the sky and let out a sigh.Mythical creatures flew over me a some nymphs in the sea.A few dwarves picking strawberries,grapes and apples up from the meadows.Satyrs galloped around with smiles on their faces.I felt a cold breeze wash of me.My hair flying along with it .Angelic singing,knitting doing cute little hobbies.

In the land of Never believe,I saw whimsical things or..well murderous things like gremlins,Minotaur’s lucky enough the friendly creatures of the land helped me defeat them.It was a fearsome,bloody battle but when it came to an end we cheered,squealed,and screamed in victory that’s why we call ourselves The Triumphants of pride.

In the land of Never believe,I saw things you cant even imagine like…like unicorns,pegasuses,goblins too many things to list!I-i saw despicable things happen,sirens alluring monsters to their death.There were small lambent’s of light scattered around the island softly glowing in the sweet moonlight the pellucid waters like glass.There were a few noctilucent clouds  which was so dreamy!The most effuglent animals so many things in the land of never believe.But there were a few amok creatures roaming freely across the island other than that it was calm…a break away from the monsterous real w0rld…

The end-by Ruby harknett from Alfred salter primary school y5-

The land of Candy

In the land of Candy, I saw mystical, tall trees, towering over the sky, mountains of delicious, sugary chocolates and enormous, tasty candy canes.

I heard a tiny, beautiful bird chirping in the wilderness, the strong wind blowing and juice rain dropping onto the ground. I felt bubblegum pink grass swaying in the wind, candy-floss clouds high up in the sky and the tides waving at me with a smile.

I smelled chocolate ice creams and blue raspberry rocks, laying on the ground, shops of fruit filled sundaes and caves full of Haribos, wobbling on the rock candy walls. I tasted yummy sweets, fresh mints that make your breath smell good and lollipops filled with a taste that is so sweet, you’ll feel like you’re in heaven with a lovely, awesome taste at the tip of your tongue.