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chapter 3

Chapter 3

 

Podkin was thinking about the Gorm. Thinking about them getting closer and closer. He just thought it was nervs but they were. They were getting closer, tracking every hair that the three rabbits left. It was a horrible thought, Podkin was scared from his head to his toes. Worry was one thing but reality was another. Podkin was telling his brothers about his worries they thought the exact same as him but then they mentioned chief…

 

The three brothers hadn’t heard from him through bunny ear talk or letters. Podkin was 1000 times more worried than he was before. All these little tiny things were bubbling up inside his head, was making him think that he didn’t want to move on to the next destination. His brothers agreed that they should stay over the night not for Podkin but to stay in hiding after they had been spotted.

After the night had passed, the three rabbits were up and out. Walking to the hidden warren. Once again they knew they would probably have to stop at another place but if their lucky maybe not. The journey was not easy it was tough and tiring, it was not easy. Hours had passed, and finally Podkin could see the hidden warren in the distance.

Back before the three brothers had set of in bunny burrow, chief had given then a gift, a gift of trust and bravery. Timid started to unravel the paper, inside was three gifts one with each of their names engraved in their present. Fred’s present was a silver spear. Timid’s gift was a heavy shield and last but not least was Podkin. Podkin’s gift was a small sneaky dagger, it was used back in the war, which was a very long time ago. There was a letter on the shield saying, this shield glows when you are in danger. A moment later, the shield started to glow, Timid got worried so the brothers had to move fast to get to the Hidden Warren.

Carrying on walking, there was a **** movement in the trees. Podkin heard the same movement back at the lake when they had stopped to get food at the cottage. A few minutes later, that movement seemed to be a thing that was right now flying at them with a bag. The thing was a ninja, it took them in the bag to some place they didn’t know off. Hey were worried sick.

Hours had passed, until they saw light. They came out into the dark, bloody underground lair where a mysterious man sat on a chair full of black widow spiders biting on his arms. Podkin and his brothers had just met the lord of darkness. He had done murders, suffocated people and more horrible things…

Chapter 3

Chapter 3

Popkin opened the legendary present and got a wooden duck that had wheels and a rope attached to it he started to role it around then looked up at Ru’s little sad soul he looked at Popkin then looked back down on the floor popkin roled it to him Ru looked at him in happiness pot leaned over to see what it was then saw a label on the side saying the gorm are close the danger is near

All of a sudden they saw the troops (Gorm) coming closer they peer out of the window and see them very close they were all holding rusted metal blades.

Then a tall big man stud amooungst the croud “that’s the chief” said pot he had scars all over his drunckened face all the troops looked at him in shock and fear this could be the end of the rabbits…

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Chapter 3

So they hid behind a enormous cow in one of the gated fields .For some reason .They thought is was the best .They hid hiding spot ever and no one would ever look there .But of course he did .Finally, they got a glimse of the figure .It was about 8ft tall, a super spikey back, very dark coloured, lots of teeth and wort is look super strong .

 

Suddenly, the figure  looked like a beast .Then it turned the opposite way so then it was time .Time to run .So they sprinted as fast as they could until they ran out of breath they ran out of breath when they got to the entrance to Dragons Den .So they slowly kept going until they saw Raven Tower…

 

The journey they couldn’t see much so it was quite boring.

 

Suddenly , a note appeared in Bob’s backpack so they all decided to open the note .It said “ Dear sons hears a bracelet that tells you if your in danger or not .It glows pink if your in danger or dangers close xx Dad “  so Bob put it  on then it glowed pink…So they checked outside then inside nothing was there.

 

Instantly, it started to glow pink brighter  .So they checked the area again .But then they only saw black .They still heard eachother and others .So then they knew they had been caught by the beasts.

 

The sacks were taken of their heads .Finally they swathe beasts chief LOG !He looked like the figure they saw at Bamburgh Farm 8FT tall , super spikey back ,very dark coloured , lots of teeth and super strong.

 

 

 

Chapter 3

Chapter 3

So they hid behind a enormous cow in one of the gated fields .For some reason .They thought is was the best .They hid hiding spot ever and no one would ever look there .But of course he did .Finally, they got a glimse of the figure .It was about 8ft tall, a super spikey back, very dark coloured, lots of teeth and wort is look super strong .

 

Suddenly, the figure  looked like a beast .Then it turned the opposite way so then it was time .Time to run .So they sprinted as fast as they could until they ran out of breath they ran out of breath when they got to the entrance to Dragons Den .So they slowly kept going until they saw Raven Tower…

 

The journey they couldn’t see much so it was quite boring.

 

Suddenly , a note appeared in Bob’s backpack so they all decided to open the note .It said “ Dear sons hears a bracelet that tells you if your in danger or not .It glows pink if your in danger or dangers close xx Dad “  so Bob put it  on then it glowed pink…So they checked outside then inside nothing was there.

 

Instantly, it started to glow pink brighter  .So they checked the area again .But then they only saw black .They still heard eachother and others .So then they knew they had been caught by the beasts.

 

The sacks were taken of their heads .Finally they swathe beasts chief LOG !He looked like the figure they saw at Bamburgh Farm 8FT tall , super spikey back ,very dark coloured , lots of teeth and super strong.

 

 

 

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Chapter 3

With a flourish, a tall shadow domed over the three rabbits, it was Scarface, the gorm leader.  All of a sudden, He did a cry. Nothing happened. Until, a few seconds later, army of gorm followers were called picking up swords and daggers as they walked past closer to the three rabbits hiding place (which was in a barrel) but ow looking through the hole in the barrel, Scarface lifted the lid up Popkin lifted his cloak to camouflage in with the barrel. Silence. Scarface shut the lid and carried on walking. Popkins heart began beating like a drum. he shut his mouth and now all they could hear was his heart, but now footsteps coming closer and closer…

 

Popkin felt like he had to get out of there and his only chance “follow me” he whispered as he stood up and lifted the lid and jumped out and ran and ran to the exit safely.

 

All the rabbits ran and ran until they decided they would go to the misty mountains and walked until they would reach it.

 

Popkin got the legendary present off his dad out of his pocket and opened the paper wrapping, it was a sword that keeps the gorm away and glows purple when they are near. He felt strong as soon as he held it and powerful. Popkin put it away in his pocket and carried on walking until he heard a sudden set of footsteps behind them, they were found.

 

Popkin looked behind them as quick as a flash and took his blade out of his sword holder, Scarface had found them and his guards were carrying a venomous spider in his hand. He put it on the floor. It walked over to Popkin and put a sticky web on the rabbits so they couldn’t move. They were trapped.

Scarface and the other gorm had taken Popkin and the rabbits into the cave. He was waiting.” your not going anywhere” he said to Popkin. Popkin figured out that the place they were at was there secret layer, and they were not safe any longer…

Chapter 3

They ran and ran, they made it! “Yayy!” Shouted Jack! *Rattle* Liam searched his backpack. “What’s this?” Asked Liam. He pulled out a small enclosed box wrapped in bark he opened it. A….Ring?! He slid it on his finger he saw thermally. “Read out the letter” Says Jack. It read out…Dear Liam, I gave you this because you’re my oldest squirrel I gave you this because you’re the strongest, I gave you this …. TO WIN!!!! Liam was determined now more than ever.
They’ve made it now there is no chance they’re getting found .Crash! Rocks were scattered across the ground Liam used the ring, they are here …They hid faster than a flash , they hid in-between rocks, under hey couldn’t get found until now…THE GOBLINS CAME CRASHING IN AND-.Liam used his ring and a goblin started floating “WOAH” shouted Liam “Get ready to fight!” “How about no”……
They woke up, where are they? How did they get here? “Hello!” Said an unknown person .He was engulfed in metal sheets and scars scattered across snout and eyes Liam looked around they were getting shipped to a….castle…..CASTLE DARK!!!!

magic ring

The next day he went searching in his bag, there was a gift and it said from dad. Then he opened a gift and it was a ring then he found a note and it said. “Press the green button to resave an item so, he pressed the green button and then an indestructible shield came out and he could control it with the ring. A couple minutes later it said “ your in danger”. Then Jamey keeped  on running he hid inside of a barrel .

A couple hours later the snowmen caught up to Jamey, he was feeling scared while the snowmen where jumping up and down in joy. The snake was thinking what to do.

A couple days later they arrived at the evil snowmen’s  base, then he got an idea he pressed the button on the ring and broke all the snowmen then he seen scare face the leader of the snowmen. It was really hard but then he defeated them. But then they got put back together and they put him in a jail cage.

Chapter 2

Chapter 2

 

James ,  peered through the yellow tinted window of the map keepers cabin .They saw the keeper snoring away on his broken ,discomforted purple coach next to the ferocious fire . They slowly moved to the entrance of the cabin and put snakes key into the crooked door . As soon as , they unlocked the door that was falling of its hinges . They sneaked into thee cosy cabin and the floor was creaking like mad over the red riverand they were nervous that the keeper would awake .Matt saw the map and snatched it of the wooden brown table. They slowly but          quietly sneaked out of the cosy cabin into the cold winter wind . When they were out of the little cabin Matt passed the enchanted map over to Eavie which she unfolded to see where they needed to head to . The map told them to head north were the base is. it lead them over the red river which followed to the deadly forest . It would be they re longest but deadliest walk ever . They set off with a good start  . Week after week they got closer and closer to their destination . First though they had to go over the red river and the deadly forest . When they made it to the unusual red river after a long walk they had to cross it before they get over . The bridge was ginormous as well as the river unfortunately .The name of the river described  it really well because the river was bright red it was blood –curling . The bridge was falling apart and the river underneath lived PARANAS !  I know puranas, yeah I said  puranas . As soon as , they got to the other side  they could see the evil forest far in the distance . One long mile later , they finally made  it to the forest . If any entered the forest the forest will come alive and try murder you  alive .As soon as they stepped onto the forest s grins of soil they heard a deep voice coming from inside the forest “GET  OUT !” the children shivered as soon as they heard the voice . Weirdly the trees started to come alive and they re roots blasted out of the ground  the children ran for miles scared out of their soul . As they were running James saw the light at the end at the forest only a few fifty yards away . After a bit they hit the end of the forest . The sky was going dull and the sun was going down..

Chapter 2 journey

Podkin heard a noise it were Jacky the thunder bird he was clutching onto a note it said the Gorm left the wild wood warden and have left they are heading your way stay safe from mum. The next day  they stared to move at night because they thuoght it was going to be safer to track us finally they were out of the wood they saw a wooden shack so they deicde to see if there is anything in it but suddenly wolf bats came out of nowhere they ran as fast as there legs can carry them when the wolf bats left because they got bored .After that, they laid down next to a tree to get some ener angy they started to get very hungry so podkin got out his bronze dagger and cut down some juicy apples.

 

That day was upsetting for Podkin , Dopkin and Popkin. Podkins bronze dagger could cut through anything except iron suddenly Podkin thought that if they cross the connection bridge the Gorm carn,t cross because there to heavy and were light so we can cross and they can not that’s actually a good idea said Dopkin whem they were in the middle of  the bridge  tracker bats started to attack them from the sky suddenly Podkin  grabed them and  as fast as wind.

After that they saw a mysterious building.  They started to move towards the building wal on the way they got some food to eat they were getting closer and closer until

THE JOURNEY

Chapter 2

The journey

So that’s what they did .They first packed all their gear .Then set of  to Moran Triangles .So that’s when the first mountain came…

“AHHHHHHHHHH”

Rob, Bob and Hob all screamed because blood foot prints .So they hugged each other and of course Hob cried  because he’s only 3 years old .Suddenly, they hiked to four other mountains and saw much more like bones ,more blood , limbs worst for last DEAD BODYS !Well of coarse there was tons more screaming and shouts .It had took them several hours because it was already night time .But Rob and Bob knew they couldn’t sleep there so Hob decided to sleep the WHOLE  journey across Moran Triangles .Rob carried Hob because he’s the strongest out the three.

 

Finally, they reached the last mountain .So then it was 6AM  Hob woke up grumpy because he said its was a bumpy ride .So Rob and Bob got angry and shouted “IF YOU CARRIED US WE WOULDN’T MOAN !!! “so then he shut up the whole journey to Tall Tree Town . Then they got to the entrance of Tall Tree Town .Stupidly,  Hob decided to walk into a tree .But that didn’t stop them .They went without stopping .Until tree stumps appeared so they had to stop for five minutes then kept going .One hour later, they got to the end finally.