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Poems of wonderful words.

The moon is

as a crystallised chandler

like a reflecting diamond ring.

jewels shop

The lolly pops is

as lickable as a ice cream

like a freezer,freezing all the yummy treats.

ice cream van.

The galaxy is

as swirly as a spining  top

like a tie dye t-shirt.

clothes shop.

The clouds is

as fluffy as a piece of candy floss

like a puffed up pillow.

bedding for beds

A turtle is

as slow as the wifi is trying to connect

like a loading sign still loading for 20 minutes.


A lonely cactus

A leaf is 

as dry as the Sahara desert,

like a bag of sand.

A lonely cactus


The moon is 

as big as a giants bath,

like the round earth.

A round bubble.


A fly is 

as vibrant as a massage chair,

like sprinkles of rain hitting your neck.

Cling film


A glue stick is

as sticky as honey,

like buzzing stingers.

Mosquito catchers.


The grass is 

as pointy as a knife,

like a pencil tip.

Sharp swords.


A ruler is 

as long as life,

like the wall of china.

straight lines.


The rainbow is

as colorful as the stars ,

like petals on flowers.

princesses and daffodils.











Metaphor Madness

The sun is

as hot as the Sahara

like an enormous beach ball reflecting off of fresh sand.

A big white warmth.


The grass is

as sharp as a needle

like a green shiny glaze.

springtime appetiser.


The snow is

as white as the sun

like a huge cold blanket.

winter relief.


A shooting star is

as fast as light

like a path in the sky.

light launch.


The sky is

as wide as a blue whale

like a blue blanket.

calming cloud crowd

My Magnificent Metaphors

The crystal-cave is

as precious  as the stars that glow in the luxurious sky.

like the world that rotates around us.

Glorious sky.


The soft edge is

as curved as the puffy duvet.

like the pillow were I lie

Comfy boarder.


The night-sky is

as splendid as the starry sky.

Spontaneous stars.


The unknown mystery  is

as spine-chilling as the captain-bad guy.

like the unquestionable robbery

Blood curling case.


The piles of work is

as nerve racking as  losing a video game.

like losing a final exam.

Horrifying work.


Birthday party!

A blanket is

as smooth as a babies  hand,

like cotton balls.

Silky- soft.


Lighting is

as sudden then the blink of an eye,

like statue still hair.

Charged body.


A 50% discount is

as pandemonium as world war 2,

like a hall of people running to safety.

Demotic destruction.


Mars is

as vibrant as new years,

like a confetti popper.

Colour blast.


The Galaxy is

as colourful as a birthday party,

like never ending celebrations.

Rainbow balls.

Brains of Albert Einstein

A book is,
as flat as a pancake,
like a leaf being stood on.
Brains of Albert Einstein.

A glue stick is,
as straight as a ruler,
like guards outside Buckingham palace.
Sticky slime.

A tree is,
as tall as the Eiffel tower,
like Mount Everest.
Oxygen giver.

A lighthouse is,
as vibrant as a shooting star,
like the colours of a candy cane.

The sun is,
as scorching as the Sahara Desert,
like a ghost pepper.
Fire bolt.

A cloud is,
as soft as my mattress,
like cotton candy.
Sky sheild.


The lit candle is

as hot as a burning campfire,

like a stick of wax standing tall.

Flicker of light.


The sun is

as hot as mars,

like a giant ball of fire.

Ball of warmth.


The crystal is

as shiny as the twinkling stars that sleeps up ahead,

like the sun that burns.

Shiny dots fill the room.


The fresh glossy paint is

as shiny as glitter,

like a polished shoe.

Glisten of light.


A box is

as exiting as a new adventure,

like a celebration of kindness.



Spiralling beauty

The Sun is

as hot as a supernova,

like a burning fire.

Dying flame.


The Moon is

as small as a microbe,

like the glare of a glass eye.

Winter wonderland.


The Sea is

as special as an early birthday present,

like an unexplored cavern.




The Galaxy is

as vibrant as  a birthday party,

like a confetti surprise.

Spiralling beauty.


The Snow is

as pale as a horrendous hurricane,

like raging rows of snowflakes.

Frozen find.





A box is                                                                                                                                                                                     as mysterious as the Bermuda Triangle,                                                                                                                          like entering a hallway of fears.                                                                                                                                          Suspense-cube.

A house is                                                                                                                                                                                as pointy as a knife,                                                                                                                                                               like walking on the edge of a cliff.                                                                                                                                     An Empty castle.

A pot is                                                                                                                                                                                     as confusing as a puzzle,                                                                                                                                                      like a bowl full of surprises.                                                                                                                                                 Metal-maze.

A crystal is                                                                                                                                                                               is as precious as a baby,                                                                                                                                                       like a guardian angel.                                                                                                                                                           Hidden-gems.

A book is                                                                                                                                                                                   as suspicious as a Sherlock Gnomes case,                                                                                                                       like hearing sounds in an alleyway.                                                                                                                                  Written-cases.


A Fiery Foe

A glue stick is                                                                                                                                                                          as sticky as webs,                                                                                                                                                             like tape on a toy.                                                                                                                                                                   Bee’s house.

An empty water bottle is                                                                                                                                                       as still as a statue,                                                                                                                                                                  Like  an AstroTurf .                                                                                                                                                                Candle stump.

The galaxy is                                                                                                                                                                           as aesthetic as a blue flowing fresh waterfall ,                                                                                                                like a confetti balloon.                                                                                                                                                           Majestic Tornado.

The ocean is                                                                                                                                                                            as elevated as the sunset breeze,                                                                                                                                        like spring water in motion.                                                                                                                                                 Dancing waves.

Flames are                                                                                                                                                                               as scorching as the sun,                                                                                                                                                       like a flame flying.                                                                                                                                                                  A Fiery Foe.