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She should have told me!

Chapter 2


The man revealed himself from the darkness, he was drenched in blood with a cut off arm.He was quite tall so his neck seemed to be hurting after looking down at Mrs Gates. His hair was silk as a snake’s skin, and was shiny like an emerald gem.


It appeared that he came from war: Anna was furious that her mother didn’t tell her about  this as she arrived at her new house; she was about to let her expression out until she saw Mrs Gates hug him tighter than a weighted blanket. Anna couldn’t hear what they were saying but couldn’t resist  how adorable it was.


“Well I have to go now” the man briskly said and then kissed Mr Gates. As Mrs Gates was about to turn around Anna ran faster than ever to the house until she rotated her head to see Mrs Gates“Shuuuush, don’t tell anyone about this or he will be executed,” Her heart was beating as rapidly as Usain Bolts in the Olympics. Outside the air flashes my eyes while I was running, inside dead silent not a single snoring just soundless.


Mrs Gates came inside also and went to my room to tell me “I saw you outside why?”  Anna was completely gobsmacked after saying this “Uh- I-I was going to buy food for a midnight feast!” by her looks she knew Anna was lying. “The reason I went to that old school to see your long lost brother, your mother told me to meet him and to give you this” she handed it over to her. It looked like a handmade friendship bracelet “The next time you’re going to my long lost brother could I come with you” Anna begged “Sure!” Mrs Gates Smile as Anna was filled with joy.


11:30P.M SHARP. Anna jumps out of her bed to see the full moon “Wow it’s so beautiful but I need to wake up mother!” She heads to Mrs Gates room to wake her up, as Anna shakes Mrs Gates it appears she’s in a deep sleep from yesterday. 


Anna quietly unlocks the door to see that the man is there looking at Anna deeply as though it was  a staring contest “AAAAAA, oh didn’t see you there, if you’re wondering where Mrs Gates is, she’s sleeping. Why don’t you come inside and see for yourself,” Anna announced “Well ok I guess?” The man said, puzzled. While they were walking inside  to the stairs,  the man introduced “By the way my name is Bilal and what’s yours?” “My name is Anna AKA Anna Banana!” Mrs Gates suddenly woke up to see Bilaal and Anna Glancing at her “Woow don’t get too close, I just woke up!” Anna and Bilal took a tiny step backwards. “Oh and Anna , Bilal is your brother, and Bilal if you’re going to sleep here, sleep in the other guest room for me please.” “WHAT, you’re joking you could have told me this earlier, you know what everyone goes back to sleep AND WE WILL SORT THIS OUT IN THE MORNING. 


That morning came, and the sun is brighter than ever. Anna came downstairs to see that Mrs  Gates and Bilal were waiting for her. “Right, let me get this straight, you’re my brother and how do you know that?” “Well when I was picking you and saw a letter on the side of your suitcase, I read and realized that he’s your brother.” Mrs Gates said carefully “Wow mum thanks alot, I will never talk to you both again, you could have explained that night and I would understand properly” Anna shouted, she stomped her way up the stairs while sobbing.


Ever since that day Anna ignored her brother and mother. They didn’t get along. If they wanted to play together or even have dinner at the dinner table, Anna would always take the plate to her room. Anna would always write letters to her old mother about what happened and told her that she wanted to stay with her again.

The Dissapearence Of The Girl

We got back home and looked around for her, but she was nowhere to be found. Where did she go? We have to find her! We went into the garden and called her name, no answer. Then we went to the park again and called her, no reply. We then went to the station and started a search party for her. *** It’s been 5 weeks and we still have’nt found her. ** A week later we then had a memorial service for her.. We found her body R-I-P we will always love you.

The midnight panther

The midnight panther is no ordinary jungle animal it is a being thousands of years old older than you older than me it only wants a friend but every time someone sees it they run in fear, after seeing it’s fiery eyes and shiny fangs.

Maya and the Centaur

Eyes like a sunflower in the warm spring.  You could see them from miles away in the black sapphire night. They were slowly getting bigger and bigger… At first the air was silent. Then very distant trotting. Getting louder and louder. Maya didn’t know to either scream or run or stay quiet. The street lamp flickered, wind rustling in her ears. Suddenly she felt a warm breath on her face. Her eyes squeezed shut flicked open immediately. A man’s face was up close. The same yellow eyes looked back at her. His wavy hair was a thick brown colour. She looked down. His legs were… different. Lets just say he was… Half human half horse!

“Who are you?” Maya said, taking a step back.

“Well. I am…”

My Sadness….

My sadness is made from people calling me names,                                                                                                    It hurts and makes me want to hide away,                                                                                                                      It can make my friends cry seeing me so upset,                                                                                                              I don’t want to make them sad but i just can’t help it.

My sadness can start off at different times,                                                                                                                      I find it hard to control,                                                                                                                                                        My sadness can be awful,                                                                                                                                                    I really try to control it the best i can.

Life is boring what the point

It was not Death, for I stood up,
And all the Dead, lie down –
It was not Night, for all the Bells
Put out their Tongues, for Noon.

It was not Frost, for on my Flesh
I felt Siroccos – crawl –
Nor Fire – for just my marble feet
Could keep a Chancel, cool –

And yet, it tasted, like them all,
The Figures I have seen
Set orderly, for Burial
Reminded me, of mine –

As if my life were shaven,
And fitted to a frame,
And could not breathe without a key,
And ’twas like Midnight, some –

When everything that ticked – has stopped –
And space stares – all around –
Or Grisly frosts – first Autumn morns,
Repeal the Beating Ground –

But most, like Chaos – Stopless – cool –
Without a Chance, or spar –
Or even a Report of Land –
To justify – Despair.


The Ship of Fear

Silence covers the ships.
The whispers are ghastly,
the winds are haunted as
the sails glisten.

The church bells chime;
the stars swerve in the 
night sky;a cup of warm 
light can fund the path