Story Extract

The scroll

Once upon a time these three friends where together watching the news. They were watching about a scroll that archaeologists just found. They said they were going to put it back even though it could have led to treasure. Suddenly, Jack, James and Wilson got interested.

Wilson noticed that and he said that they should go and get the scroll. But they didn’t know what awaited them…

The first obstacle they came upon was someone who called himself ‘ The Mandalorian.’ He wouldn’t let us past with out giving him some gold so he started shooting them with a sniper so they ran and avoided all his shots and made it alive. They didn’t know where they were they were going they were just walking.

“Hi I’m agent Jonesy.” Stated a man wearing black. “Oh no the zero point isn’t looking too good.” Said Jonesy frightened.  “The what point?” Asked the friends at the same time. “The z e r o point. Never mind. Bye.” Exclaimed Jonesy running up some stairs. The three followed.  “Raz not now.” Said the agent. Trying to fix  the thingy point. Raz floated and waited. When jones was done Raz started shooting these beams towards them. Raz picked up a scroll and The scroll seemed familiar.

Then Jams realised it was… the scroll they were looking for. Raz said if they gave him gold  he will give it over. Mr Jonesy was now going down he stairs but the 3 stayed. They tried ticking him and snatching it but he had a strong grip. He started shooting beams the scroll sipped out of his hands and he didn’t notice then Jack quickly took the scroll and it was cops and robbers now  the friends were the robbers and Raz was the cop trying to tazze them with beams.  That didn’t make sense did it?

Today on cp news we don’t have cp news we have breaking news. There’s been something known as ‘Moth Kid’ Apparently he is a kid who is half moth half human. He also likes eating humans so be aware. To you James. Here I am at the Sandovol’s house and they are showing me  photo of it. I am getting goosebumps let me tell you, you   don’t want mess with that thing.

Are you bored? About to call your friends to come over? Well before you do. Make up your mind do you want to go somewhere full of adventure. Or just lie down on a couch and waste your energy on talking. Or if you like talking then come to ‘The Wonder Emporium’ with your friends. Well the choice is yours but e have told you the best decision. Make up your mind!

Into history? Well guess what we sell history books at the gift shop. It’s not just that there’s way more. Like real dinosaurs. Tigers (In cages.) A aquarium. I mean we would need 1,00 pages to write everything down and about 20 centuries. If you don’t believe us then come over to see if we are telling the truth. (We are.) We guarantee you. Also kids under 6 get 90% off for the tickets. How amazing is that?

We have unseen wonders here like a pterodactyl a pet a baby one. It is SUPPER DUPPER CUTE! Also no need to worry it is tamed and it roams free. So you might run into the little drago. Well if your looking for details let me give them to you! It is red and green. Super cute. Orange eyes (Which are adorable.) It will only pinch you with it’s beak if you annoy it. We don’t mind you petting it or acting like it’s your dog Fred.

We have a mini mall too so if your in the mood for shopping your are in luck and you know where to come. We sell just about everything. Even groceries we also have some fee Starbucks for you. We have got McDonalds, KFC, Greg’s, Nando’s. Every restaurant you an imagine. We also have jewelry shops like Pandora. H. Samuel. Ernest Jones. It’s the same for jewelry. All the shops you can imagine. Basically we have ever single shop there is on earth.

INTRO:

No body else  knew anything about the emporium, it held most questions of Earth. No body dared to get the answers an there’s 1 person up for the job and that’s A 12 year old kid named Jack. He’s not doing it to answe planet Earth’s questions he is doing it for an adventure. He looks like somebody who could come out of there ALIVE…  and so let his adventure begin!

Chapter 1:

Jack was getting ready for his adventure when his Mum called  him down for breakfast. Jack was super exited but his mum was a different story she was worried. Sick but she let him go as he really wanted to but she had have a lie down because getting a headache from all the worrying. She had packed him a weeks food just in case it was a long adventure. Jack was leaving the door but his Mum stopped him she wanted to say something before he left ‘’I love you’’ She said in tears. Jack didn’t know why she was crying and his Mother had to make something so she said she missed her Sister in Australia. Before Jack left he knew he had to cheer up his Mum he couldn’t leave her like this.

Now Jack was leaving for real his um felt better as he cheered him up. After 16 minutes Jack was already missing his neutering Mum. Once he got there he talked to the owner and HE WALKED IN. At first he was exited but he started having second thoughts after he literally entered.

It wasn’t a happy place like he considered it would be, there were cob webs, it was a total mess. He wanted to leave but it was like a maze and it would cost a adventure to pass. But it wasn’t a adventure was happy about or was going to be happy about. He usually loved adventures so this was quit  a surprise.

Go and open the red door maybe you’ll find blood everywhere and there will most likely be blood than water in the seas.

Go and open the orange door, lets just hope you don’t mistake an apricot for a melon.

Go and open the yellow door, you’ll probably go bananas seeing how may bananas there are in the that strange room.

Go and open the green door, you’ll almost puke seeing how much broccoli there is.

Go and open the cyan door, You’ll almost definitely see a whale communicating to it’s friends and your  ears would be ringing for the rest of your life.

Go and open the black door, bats will fly everywhere screeching terror-stricken.

Go and open the white door, A cloud will hover above you.

Go and open the pink door, maybe the clouds will be made candy-floss just like everything else in that room.

Go and open the brown door, maybe there will be about a million squirrels eating acorns.

Go and open the Grey door, maybe there will be about a billion elephants.

Go and open the red door, maybe you’ll trip over a pile of piquant chili that will burn your mouth.

Go and open the orang door, maybe you’ll keep on slipping because of how many baked beans there are on the floor.

Go and open the yellow door, maybe people will start to butter you for money.

Go and open the green door, Maybe everything there will be made of cacti.

Go and open the blue door, maybe you’ll see a appealing butterfly land on your hand.

Go and open the red door maybe you’ll find blood everywhere and there will most likely be blood than water in the seas.

Go and open the orange door, lets just hope you don’t mistake an apricot for a melon.

Go and open the yellow door, you’ll probably go bananas seeing how may bananas there are in the that strange room.

Go and open the green door, you’ll almost puke seeing how much broccoli there is.

Go and open the cyan door, You’ll almost definitely see a whale communicating to it’s friends and your  ears would be ringing for the rest of your life.

Go and open the black door, bats will fly everywhere screeching terror-stricken.

Go and open the white door, A cloud will hover above you.

Go and open the pink door, maybe the clouds will be made candy-floss just like everything else in that room.

Go and open the brown door, maybe there will be about a million squirrels eating acorns.

Go and open the Grey door, maybe there will be about a billion elephants.

Go and open the red door, maybe you’ll trip over a pile of piquant chili that will burn your mouth.

Go and open the orang door, maybe you’ll keep on slipping because of how many baked beans there are on the floor.

Go and open the yellow door, maybe people will start to butter you for money.

Go and open the green door, Maybe everything there will be made of cacti.

Go and open the blue door, maybe you’ll see a appealing butterfly land on your hand.