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suspense paragraph

It’s a freezing cold winter night,in the middle of the forest, with the trees shaking. Here is a list of things that happened in  the night : A freezing cold man walking in the rain, two cars speeding up the crunchy mountain and the snow falling beyond the ground. As the rain was going ; the man was drenched whilst he was walking down the lane… whilst the crystal-clear snow was coming down the car was full of snow.

suspense paragraph

It’s a freezing cold winter night,in the middle of the forest, with the trees shaking. Here is a list of things that happened in  the night : A freezing cold man walking in the rain, two cars speeding up the crunchy mountain and the snow falling beyond the ground. As the rain was going ; the man was drenched whilst he was walking down the lane… whilst the crystal-clear snow was coming down the car was full of snow.

writing in past tense

Something was crawling up the side of the sky ship’s wooden hull.Ty whose face paled, shrunk back and ducked down behind the tiller but Mariana, rushed to the edge and peered into the gloom below.She could make out something or somebody scrabble up the side of the ship.It was quite small and had green eyes.It paused and stared back up at her.“It is a baby dragon,” she called, “ and it’s hurt”.Mariana, whose brow frowned with concentration, reached down to grip it’s outstretched paw and pulled it onto the deck “ It was hurt in  the storm.”The dragonlet shivered with the cold and whimpered.Ty, dashed off to fetch a ship’s blanket, wondered anxiously and if the dragonlet’s mother was pleased to know that they would be helping her baby.  Mariana spoke calmly to the baby, hoping that captain O’shea could take a  dim view of what has happened.

 

Multi clause sentences

At 5-o’clock the car accelerated to the restaurant , drove round the corner rapidly and came to a halt elegantly.

 

At teatime the dragon landed on the school roof, crawled towards the school quickly and paused on the floor.

 

At dinner time the teacher stopped at the shop, picked up the book fiercely and ran back home.

 

At 8pm the airship hovered over the school, whilst it aimed its laser beams rapidly and fired at the headteacher.

spag

The snow fell whilst Tom waited. He was in the house when the mobile phone buzzed and rang so he picked it up and listened as he crossed the room he picked up his suitcase before he opened the door and went outside.

 

I ate my breakfast although it was snowing.

I took my time in case it was silent.

I played my trombone when it was scary.

I gave the frog a helping hand as there was a snake there.

I played my music very loudly since there was no one there.

After I fed the shark there was an odd sound.

Before I bought a gas mask it was a strange request.

Whenever I wor a shirt there was a bad smell.

spag

The snow fell whilst Tom waited. He was in the house when the mobile phone buzzed and rang so he picked it up and listened as he crossed the room he picked up his suitcase before he opened the door and went outside.

 

I ate my breakfast although it was snowing.

I took my time in case it was silent.

I played my trombone when it was scary.

I gave the frog a helping hand as there was a snake there.

I played my music very loudly since there was no one there.

After I fed the shark there was an odd sound.

Before I bought a gas mask it was a strange request.

Whenever I wore a shirt there was a bad smell.

conjunction

Bob ran down the road when he fell over.

 

The thunder roared as soon as the hobbits hid.

 

Bilbo slept in a cave after the goblins attacked.

 

The cart came to a wheezing halt as Gandalf strode into the hobbit.

 

Jim was interested in the idea when he rang his friend.

 

Owls are nocturnal although this means they are active at night.

SPaG – All About Football

Slew ran cheerfully across the field. As he ran, he was kicking a football so hard that the ball went flying over a large, ancient oak tree. Slew had this exciting smile on his cheerful face. The field was like a big, damp puddle.

 

“Do you have a spare football?” shouted Slew from across the wet field.

The Ship Of Stars

The Ship Of Stars

The reak of the deck

Haunted these halls

A crying broken ship

A sprinkle of hope

Not to be seen

Until a green door with

Stars with a gleam

A Green one in the middle.

 

A ship wrecked and torn

And a room full of life and color

Once a rumor then a Myth

And  now a Fact.