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Podkin chapter four

As they were being dragged down the rough iron steps, they finally stopped at an old small brick structure blocked off with steel bars.

The two menacing Gorm soldiers chucked them into the cage and Podkin went flying into one of the walls making him unconscious.

“Podkin, Podkin” came a voice. It was Paz trying to wake him up and warn him.

“Come on, Podkin a gorm soldier is coming” and indeed it was shorter than the rest though. As it got closer Podkin noticed something about it, then the gorm stopped in his tracks and slowly took off its iron filled helmet to reveal a face of a badger .

“Who are you?” asked Paz curiously, “and why are you helping us?” she added .

“It’s Monty, Paz he was one of dad’s friends, he helped dad escape from one of the weasel minded scrap metal over grown brutes.” said Podkin.

“I’ve come to help you escape, here take this I believe this is yours” said Monty handing Podkin the dagger.

“Yes we can get out of this wretched place” shouted Podkin excitedly, whistling through the steel bars, after getting out of the jail, Podkin wanted revenge and he had a plan, he was going to get caught! He sprinted up the iron stairs and into the main hallway where all the gorm were getting ready to attack splinter Holem.

As he entered at the top of his voice “SCRAMERSHANK! YOU WANTED ME SO HERE I AM!”

“Well looks like you want a fight, so be it “snarled scramershank “stand down boys let me kill him!” Podkin slowly took out his dagger ready to strike.

“When I stamp my foot, fire at will,” Scramershank said to the other gorm.

Podkin charged at Scramershank starclaw at the ready, the gorm leader ran at Podkin at emense speed but Podkin was ready. 

He skidded on the floor towards Scramershank but instead of cutting his leg, Podkin ripped open the iron that was carved to the gorm leader’s leg exposing his filthy skin. Then Podkin slid on the floor again, this time cutting Scramershanks leg, as he fell to the floor with a BANG! One of the gorm thought that this was the signal so he fired a flaming arrow at Podkin but the rabbit leaped out of the way and the arrow hit Scramershank in the face killing him. Then because Scramershank was controlling all the other gorn they fell to the floor dead.

With that the three rabbits and the badger set off for the safety of Splinter Holem hoping they would never see a gorm face again or so they thought.

 

chapter 4 escaping the gorms lair

We were all locked up in the gorm’s cave-like dungeon. After 10 minutes we all fell asleep from being extremely tired from walking all day. When we woke up we realize it wasn’t a dream and we needed to escape, so Podkin, Paz and Pook made a plan in the middle of the night while everyone was sleeping we would tie there legs up and steal the keys so we could lock the door and they wouldn’t bother us ever again but to make sure they couldn’t escape we would bury the keys 10 inches deep. 

 

So that knight when everyone was asleep we tied there legs together but Pook was asleep there was nothing for him to do really, when we tied up everyone’s legs together we worked together to steal the keys then we woke up pook and we ran as fast as we could to the door we went outside locked the door and quickly buried the keys a long way away from the gorms lair, finally we were free from the pungent dungeon.

 

After we packed up all our stuff and we stared at the map for 10 minutes we were ready to go home. Well sort of because our old home isn’t safe anymore but Podkin, Paz and Pook,s father built a secret burrow, he knew someday this was going to happen. It took them about 1 and a half hours to get home but it was worth the walk  because when Paz and Pook saw their mother and aunt they were screaming and shouting in delite. But then Pook asked their mother where their father was and she said “he is in bed.” Podkin and Paz asked if he was ok and she responded he is fine he just needs lots of rest.

chapter 4 escaping the gorms lair

We were all locked up in the gorm’s cave-like dungeon. After 10 minutes we all fell asleep from being extremely tired from walking all day. When we woke up we realize it wasn’t a dream and we needed to escape, so Podkin, Paz and Pook made a plan in the middle of the night while everyone was sleeping we would tie there legs up and steal the keys so we could lock the door and they wouldn’t bother us ever again but to make sure they couldn’t escape we would bury the keys 10 inches deep. 

 

So that knight when everyone was asleep we tied there legs together but Pook was asleep there was nothing for him to do really, when we tied up everyone’s legs together we worked together to steal the keys then we woke up pook and we ran as fast as we could to the door we went outside locked the door and quickly buried the keys a long way away from the gorms lair, finally we were free from the pungent dungeon.

 

After we packed up all our stuff and we stared at the map for 10 minutes we were ready to go home. Well sort of because our old home isn’t safe anymore but Podkin, Paz and Pook,s father built a secret burrow, he knew someday this was going to happen. It took them about 1 and a half hours to get home but it was worth the walk  because when Paz and Pook saw their mother and aunt they were screaming and shouting in delite. But then Pook asked their mother where their father was and she said “he is in bed.” Podkin and Paz asked if he was ok and she responded he is fine he just needs lots of rest.

chapter 4

What they thought was a good trap was actually hopeless because of a trap door beneath them which led to the other side of the forest. They had escaped the ferret brained lumps. That second scene was the darkness of a clear night. That was a close one pickin sure was sis. We  should go now. We will have to go to Horizon ranch, the horse camp, the only safe place. That is a brilliant idea to do but it is off our map I already know the way but how Paz. Lady Ramodo, the lady of green farm Warren. We would go there every summer. But now I know she can help us because she now works there. Let’s run tonight. Okay. A week of roaming later Paz and Pic were days away from the ranch and lost hope until Paz saw the ranch not that far away. We will be there by sunset in a week. The week dragged on and on until a ranch cart passed them with Lady Ramodo she allowed them to hop on. Be there by sunset tomorrow. As they were travelling in the cart the lady told them all about the gorm and how a bonedancer had killed scramershank. As well as the gorm promise and how they had promised if the Lord died then they kill everyone else. Then Paz said “if all of them are dead then are we safe” 

“ Why of course my darling” the lady said 

“Hurray” the kids chanted 

As they continued the journey the question was asked will we help out. The reply was yes we are overloaded and need all the possible help. So when they arrived all that was done was helping out.

chapter 4 podkin 1 ear

Soon Later the three rabbits were being dragged to a nearby gloomy cave, where they were getting tied up on poles and moments after that a loud voiced unsettling voice appeared

“ you think you could get away did you” growled Flesh-burner

“ did you because you didn’t you are now my slaves” 

and before Podkin, Paz or Podkin could reply, the whole of the gorm walked out of the cave and left all the rabbits alone.

again they started thinking of ideas to escape the demented rabbits and as usual Paz came up with a great idea, the idea was this , Paz had remembered that weeks before they left they had had a lesson on what to do when they have been tied up on pole and all you had to do was move you hands around the material that was tying you up and in a few seconds it would become strechy and then break and then you can relaese you legs.  so they started exactly the same instructions as they learned  and in 5 minutes they were out but they couldn’t fool the gorm.

 

 As soon as they got out the Gorm started chasing them at lightning speed they weren’t far away from the last safe place and a few minutes later they were there slowly the edged closer into the last safe place it was protected by a shield that wouldn’t let any of the gorm in they didn’t want to live on the run any more so they entered Dark water holm.

The escape from the Gorm chapter 4

As we looked around, we saw our mother and Aunt strapped to the wire caging. We all wanted to gasp, but as there were thousands of Gorm surrounding us, we thought it best to keep our mouths shut. We were so glad to see them, they were also glad to see that we were all right and that fireball wasn’t with us. ( They were glad to see that fireball wasn’t with us, as it used to be our fathers messenger. )

 

That was it, we were surrounded by Gorm, and were trapped. Two Gorm picked me and Paz up, along with Pook and took us through corridor after corridor, they kept going on and on, until, what felt like a lifetime, we reached the dungeons. Where we were thrown into a cell filled with a pungent smell. It was a long time until we finally heard a noise, the noise was faint at first, but then it got louder, and, louder until it became like a deafening stampede.

 

 It was then, when all of a sudden, the rabbits from hegefood warren tunneled in, we were saved, we were finally saved, and they had fireball too. It must have been the sparrow that had gathered a rescue party. Then me and Paz told the rabbits where our mother and Aunt were to then save them. So we dug and dug to the point where our mother was, and then and birst up to then drag our mother and aunt to safety. Out of rooster lands and back to our cabin where we then dug more rooms, and collected food and water, to then have celebrations, as our warren, hegefood was destroyed.

Creature Poems

Eyes like a creamy oreo filling,

Claws stretched out ready to do some brutal killing,

Sat on a wooden bench Spying out it’s prey,

Retractable teeth slowly going to Decay.

 

A unique tail makes it go undiscovered,

Eyes like a black void,

Staring at it for too long makes it annoyed, 

It’s Wings are so big you couldn’t recover. 

The Dragon

 

This daring dragon is scary,

It is looking for dairy,

It can suck blood from its ferocious predators,

Taking a massive help from the claw being wary.

 

Its naked eye staring at you,

Makes it a lot different than you thought it’d do.

Its gritting teeth snapping like sound

Makes your fragile heart pound.

the two animals

This animal is like a demon as if you look closely you can see blood all over its grey skin and the claws are as sharp as spikes. If you look closely you can see a spike on the end of its tail. Keep  an eye on its face and you cans see razor sharp teeth sticking out and the eyes are going crazy.

 

A diamond blue bird flapping its graceful wings through the sky. The bird is different from other birds because this one has quit a big tail and is very small itself. Judging by the look of this bird it must be very fast and is very hard for predators to catch. So if you were to try and chase this bird it would be very hard as it could fly at the speed of light.

 

the two animals

This animal is like a demon as if you look closely you can see blood all over its grey skin and the claws are as sharp as spikes. If you look closely you can see a spike on the end of its tail. Keep  an eye on its face and you cans see razor sharp teeth sticking out and the eyes are going crazy.

 

A diamond blue bird flapping its graceful wings through the sky. The bird is different from other birds because this one has quit a big tail and is very small itself. Judging by the look of this bird it must be very fast and is very hard for predators to catch. So if you were to try and chase this bird it would be very hard as it could fly at the speed of light.