David and the volcano
- Once there was a guy called David. He saw a volcano near the city and he didn’t know what to do… Suddenly a floating book appeared. Then it wrote go two steps forward and one step backwards after he did that the volcano disappeared in to ashes and the city was saved what will happen next…
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