The prize
Luke was at the arcade and surprisingly he won a prize (which was a bouncy ball) that started taking him somewhere. After five minutes of following the bouncy ball, he came face to face with a house at the end of a quiet street that has remained untouched for years.
You have a good idea here, Aiden, but you need to put in s bit more description. What did the ball look like? How did it behave? How did it jump out of Luke’s grasp? How did Luke know to follow it?