There are many different species of dragon all over the world; however, the most festive dragon is the Christmas Dragon. Found in only the coolest parts of the planet, Christmas dragons are very rare and are not spotted often. Many people believe that the Christmas dragon is not true however it is.
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1. I love how you really made me want to see the dragon in real life.
2.Why are they rare?
3.Maybe you could describe your dragon in a bit more detail and explain why they are rare.
1. I liked your idea of a Christmas dragon
2. Could you add some more to it?
3.how did you get the idea of a Christmas dragon
I really liked your paragraph.
Try adding more adjectives.
Why write about Christmas?
1)I liked the way you used however.
2)It all makes sense.
3)Remember your commas!