Mother
You are my sun shine on a cloudy day,
when I’m down your lovely voice takes my fear away,
your love is so pure it makes me feel so secure.
You are my sun shine on a cloudy day,
when I’m down your lovely voice takes my fear away,
your love is so pure it makes me feel so secure.
i love your poem because its about a family member , and the rhymes are very perfect; have you listened to a song about mothers on youtube ? ; It could be better if you add more verses maybe about how is mother , her behaviour maybe even her love.