the firedrake dragon
it’s deep blue beady eyes pierced my soul,
observing the unforgiving night.
huge leathery wings flapped in the icy air,
flying higher and higher like a kite.
sharp claws deeper and deeper into it’s pathetic prey,
splattering blood on every inch of a towering tree,
sharp teeth-like spikes jutted up down a scaly back,
cutting the skin that belongs to me.
an elongated tale wagged as if giving a warning,
making the whole forest shake and shiver.
a fiery coloured tongue wrapped around me,
making me look like a strange figure.
flames burst out lighting the dark night.
you are a firedrake dragon,
flap your wings and take to flight.
This is a great piece of writing, Aoife. I like the imagery you have used as well as the occasional rhyme. Well done, I look forward to reading more of your writing.
this is a very good piece of writing but check some mistakes next time!