The Out-Of-Control Ship.
As they plummeted down towards the ground Captain O’Shea was trying and trying to control the Stargrazer. Then completely out of the blue, came a mountainous dragon, it was about double the size of the Stargrazer, they soon realized that this must be the dad of the dragons they saw only a few seconds ago. It towered high above all the crew that were on the ship (it was about ten times the size of Ty and Mariana). Only a few seconds later, it started to toss the ship back and forth on its tail and forehead, Ty and Marina were flying through the air but then they managed, by the tip of their fingers, to clench onto the mast of the Stargrazer. They soon realized that Captain O’Shea was not there…
I think that is very good and i love the detail. Well done.