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The Falcon

An unknown shadow-like thing was coming up the deck as slow as a turtle. Jack, who had a cold sweat dripping down his cheek ran, straight into the basement of the ship since  Jack was very afraid of creatures coming there after the huge creature popped their balloon.

 Josh could see a small black figure coming up at the side of the ship. It was a danger alert for him but it was coming slowly. It was so small compared to a normal sized animal it was as small as a shell! It’s eyes flashed; they were both like diamonds then Josh came a bit closer to it and realised “Its a BABY PEGASUS!” Cried Josh “and it’s hurt by something Josh, whose eyes lit up, came closer to the pegasus, Josh and Jack then helped the creature up.“It must have gotten hurt while we were fighting the monsters.”

The pegasus was shivering and crying quietly.So Jack went to fetch some blankets and a med-kit

One Response to “The Falcon”

  1. I liked it yes especially the bit when they found out what it was were did you get the idea maybe try using a better sentence structure i didn’t understand a few bits.

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