On my way home
I met a man called fox,
He had hair as red as fire burning down the Australian forest,
He wore a rabbit skin coat to keep himself warm during the white winter,
His was squeaky and soothing like a nice foot massage.
I met a woman called snow,
Out of her palms spiked icicles as sharp as a bread knife ready to slice into a beget,
She spoke as quickly as a child sledding down a huge hill with excitement.
I like the descriptions, but I don’t quite understand line 3.
Great work on the poem, How long did it take you to think of what to do for a fox? And I would try adding two more sentences for the Snow one.