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On my way home

I met a man called fox,

He had hair as red as fire burning down the Australian forest,

He wore a rabbit skin coat to keep himself warm during the white winter,

His was squeaky and soothing like a nice foot massage.

 

I met a woman called snow,

Out of her palms spiked icicles as sharp as a bread knife ready to slice into a beget,

She spoke as quickly as a child sledding down a huge hill with excitement.

2 Responses to “On my way home”

  1. I like the descriptions, but I don’t quite understand line 3.

  2. Great work on the poem, How long did it take you to think of what to do for a fox? And I would try adding two more sentences for the Snow one.

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