Archive | January, 2023

Mrs honey

As soon as grim-faced Mr Hardy strode into class seven, the familiar room immediately appeared to turn gloomy. He was thin with an unpleasant stare rather like an angry snake. ‘Settle down children, ’ hissed the new teacher, ‘I am not used to being disobeyed.’

As soon as Mrs honey entered the room a smile appeared as quick as a flash on everyone’s face she said kindly”please can you sit down quitley class 7 And prepare for our first lesson of the day Science!” She had a wide smile which stretched across her face. Her smile was that bright it looked like the sun. She was kind like a deer.

Grammar

As soon as happy looking Mrs.Brown danced into class 9, the un-familiar room suddenly burned into a hysterical and sad. He was tall and big,had a pleasant smile rather like a kind bear.                                   .                                                                                                                                                                                        ‘Hurry up everybody! Yelled  the aged teacher,’I am not used to not being obeyed!

The new teach

The minute frown faced mr hardy stomped into the classroom seven, the familiar room straight away started to turn gloomy he was thin with a horrible stare rather like a hungry shark

’calm down children’, whispered the new teacher,I am not used to being disobeyed’.

The new teacher

As jolly miss holly skipped into the class seven, the familiar class immediately turn positive. She was thin with cute eyes like a puppy that is happy.

“Sit down children” said miss holly kindly “happy to see you all.”

The new teacher

As soon as a the spirit of joy , Mr Hardy giggled at his class seven , the howl class sat joyfully and over joy . He was wearing happy bright cloths.

 

Talk to the children smiled at the new teacher.’I think you should read your books my little angels’.

The new teacher

As jolly miss holly skipped into the class seven, the familiar class immediately turn positive. She was thin with cute eyes like a puppy that is happy.

“Sit down children” said miss holly kindly “happy to see you all.”

The new teacher.

As soon as the warm-faced Mrs May skipped happily into class seven, the familiar room immediately appeared to turn from gloomy to beaming. She was big, with a lovely smile rather like the sun!

‘Okay! Okay! Children please may you quiet down!’ Softly said by the new teacher, ‘we’re going to have a lovely day if we just settle down for a second!’

 

The angry teacher

As soon as grim-faced Mr Hardy stepped into class seven,the familiar room immediately appeared to turn it happy.He was thin with an obnoxious smile like an aggressive ant.Sit down children,whistled the new teacher,

`I am not used to disobeying.

 

Character rewrite

As soon as happy -faced Mr Hardy skipped  into class seven, the familiar room immediately appeared to turn brighter. He was big with an joyful look rather like an cute bunny.

 

‘Settle down children,’ said  the new teacher,

‘I am not used to being welcomed!”

 

  

The Character Rewrite

As soon as jolly-faced Mr Funzy stepped into class seven, the familiar room immediately appeared to turn extremely pleasant to be in. He looked like a chamedian with a handsome gaze rather like a funny clown.

 

‘Hey kids let’s all settle down so we can play something fun,’ said the new teacher in a goofy voice,

‘I am not used to being not listened to, but we will all have a good time,’ he giggled whilst talking.