Improving Sentences

At seven in the morning, the teacher stopped in her car, picked up the book quickly and drove to work, still thinking how  Garry’s book got in her car.

Late at night, the dragon landed in the school’s playground, approached the building and paused right in front of it looking around making sure that no one eyed  him.

In the middle of the day, the star-ship hovered above the park, aimed its laser beams, aimed perfectly and fired, hitting the giant statue in the centre.

As dawn broke, the car accelerated next to a park, drove around the corner quickly and came to a hault making sure no one noticed him.


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