Adding adverbials

In the morning,the car accelerated in the garage,so Harry drove round the corner drifting and came to a halt at the cake shop to buy a cake. 

At midday,Hermione stopped outside Hagrid’s hut,picked up the book about Nicolas Flamel and ran back inside clutching onto her wand.

At midnight,the blood covered dragon landed behind a house and crawled towards the school limping then paused inside growling.

In the evening,the star ship hovered over the school aiming its laser beam at a target and fire at the middle of the school blowing it to pieces.

At midnight,a fire dragon and an ice dragon flew to a mountain to have war with their army of dragons then they started to fight blood everywhere.

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