Rain dropped very fast: There was no sunshine so it was very boring so to start of with this suspense story,the beach water had waves coming through the water and the waves would not stop, and the rain poured as if a storm was coming and even if a storm came,it could be dangerous and could make u sick.The seagulls didnt look normal and they didn’t sound normal. The seagulls kept bitting people every time they fed the poor animals.The seagulls could be haunted.

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