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As soon as exited mr hardey walked in his class he was so happy to see a full class and he was smiling the hole way through the. class he was happy with a pleasant face happy bear settle down children said the smiling teacher
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Hi Dylan, well done for posting so quickly on TeachingLive. But, I’m sure you know the rules about capital letters and full stops! Make sure you check your work before submitting it for moderation.
Well done Dylan this is a really good piece of writing. What made you think of these wonderful ideas? An improvement could be your punctuation.
You need some more punctuation like capital letters and full stops. I liked how you described the teacher.
Amazing work but you need more punctuation like commas and fullstops.