The Magical Green Tree.
On Monday, I found a cute, fluffy ,polar bear dancing in white snow .
On Tuesday , I walk to the sunny beach whilst dancing in the sun .
On Wednesday , I saw an ice burg dripping quietly on my head.
On Thursday, I touched an old rusty glass in an abandoned ancient house .
On Friday, I tasted an amazing glazed chocolate doughnut.
On Saturday, I heard a sweet bird cheeping outside my kitchen window.
On Sunday, I dreamed of a glorious pink sunset on the beach with the waves clashing on the night black beach .
Well done for submitting your first poem, Jessica. We enjoyed reading it. We love the phrase “night black beach” in your last line. You chose the smae verb, “dancing” in your first two lines. We wondered if you could find a different verb to replace one of them to avoid repetition. Great start!