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Boom.

Gun shot, as a metal bolt of lighting struck the crock house as Joe, who had a wave for black hair, was hidden in the old crooked up cupboard. A black finger frequently circle the room looking for a hidden object. Suddenly the flash of blue and red run up the room as it look like there was going to be a fight.A man which looked to be a criminal wait there ready to attack but Joe did not who what the superhero was doing. 

 

As quick as a flash the red and blue man rush up handcuffed the criminal. This is the end Jonny I will not come to arrested anymore.

A normal day in the park

Jonny, who looked as if he hadn’t had any sleep, ambled in the park with his sister. His sister was about the age of 5 and was already almost as tall as Jonny who was 11, but they still got on very well. But after hundreds of visits to the park Jonny didn’t want to be here. He moaned to his sister “can we go home now”, but his sister wouldn’t take no for a answer. They were expecting just a stroll in the park and to visit the playground but little did they know, it would be nothing like that….

 

Wearing a black hoodie, black mask, black jeans and even black shoes was four criminals, in fact the most wanted criminals in the whole country. Who knows what could happen if these people met, this regular day could turn into something unable to be called normal.

It MannyN TJS

After school Joe (who was wearing his scruffy, itchy uniform), was approaching his house when he saw a mysterious figure sitting on his chair in his front room. As he turned the key to open the door he felt a cold wet hand on his shoulder…

The wet morning by EmilyBTJS

Mr John, a young teacher with light, wavy, brown hair, was teaching the class maths. Like always Katie, a girl who had bright red hair and freckles, was gathering in all of the information Mr John was babbling on about.

 

At 9:15 the door swung open and a socking, wet boy came rushing in (he looked as though he had just woken up). The boys name was Josh his hair was messy and his shirt was untucked as he sat down in his chair Mr John carried on with his lesson.

Julia and the kidnapper

Julia, a young girl with long blonde hair, crawled along on her flat tummy in the damp, dark tunnel, wondering whether she should turn back then and there. All of a sudden, there was an ear splitting cry, so Julia decided to leave that idea behind. Thump, Julia had hit her head on the wall in front of her. Looking round, she realised that she had come to a fork in the tunnel, so she decided right is right and left is wrong. A light shone at the end of the tunnel, she had gone the correct way! But then she spotted it, a bear trap. Looking in her pockets, she found an old tennis ball deep beneath all her scraps. When she came into the light, she straightened up and dropped the ball into the trap. Ding! Now she had finished her trap, she had to flee the scene.

 

Mr Thomson, an old, greying man, ran, crouched against the tunnel roof. Far in front of him, there was a girl named Julia, who knew too much about his life and what he does everyday. All the time, he tries to kidnap children then send them to work in his mines under his house to find gem and jewels. Hat the end of each tunnel he had put bear traps for her to be trapped in. He watched her as she turned right, he knew that tunnel led back to his house. Ding! His trap had worked! Sprinting ever faster, he saw something small, a tennis ball? She had tricked him!

The Eels of Lekstraat by Alejandro

Kel, who’s hair was untied, trudged over the snow, winter in the Northern Netherlands was the best time of year, she was happy, everyone was. On the ice of the lake of Lekstraat was the only miserable person in the neighbourhood: the Keeper of Eels; he was swarmed by hungry eels, like the storm cloud in the sky. But these ones looked different, as if they were plotting something, as if they were staring, at Kel…

Character description. By Arrin TJS

Rose, with a sea of rose hear, walked nervously into the classroom “Um… sorry I’m late…sr.” she stammered. “I… I… I lost track of time.” Her glasses slipped down her nose. “Late, late no one in this class is late!” exclaimed the teacher (Mr Mayhem).

Late

William, a small, shy, frail boy with blonde hair with knots, slipped into the classroom, as the teacher asked him why he was late. He explained, leaving out lots of embarrassing parts, and sat down, the things that had happened that morning still rushing through his head.

 

A moment later, Joe, a large, muscular, troublemaking boy with black, messy hair burst in, almost taking the door off of it’s hinges. He yelled a lie about why he was late and sat in his usual spot, talking loudly to everybody around him. He didn’t seem to have a care in the world.

Adam the angry boy by Sammi

Adam, who was a young boy with dark hair as dark as the midnight sky, angrily opened his houses door. He sat on the living room sofa (trying not to talk to anyone)   he went over what had happened at school, it was unbelievable.He could not believe his friends made fun of him.

 

A little bit later his sister (eve) came in she opened the door happily.As she passed her exam.”Hey” said eve” guess who passed her exam.”well done” said her parents.

Charlotte contrasting character scene

Jenna (who was 13 had brown hair and was extremely short) ran into the classroom almost falling over she whispered “,Sorry I’m late miss, I had to quickly finish my homework.” Luckily the teacher was to busy to notice that she had crept into the classroom so Jenna just sat down on her chair.  

A few moments later she heard the bell, it frightened her because she had lost track of time and she usually knows when everything starts and ends. At break she met her friends, Claire and Millie, they said to her “,You are never usually late, what happened?”…