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To use cohesive and a range of different devices

Long, long ago there was a poor girl called Polly. She lived in a little bungalow, every day she would go down to the beach therefore she lived right next to it. Early one morning, Polly went for a walk but as a result she was in danger as she listened to a creepy sound. It sounded like a dinosaur screeching. So she walked more close to investigate what the sound was. As she walked closer she saw blood. So she ran for her life with her heart racing.

 

Using conjunctions

1.Bob ran down the road until he fell over.

2.The thunder roared as the hobbits hid.

3.Bilbo slept in a cave until the goblins attacked.

4.The cart can to a wheezing halt before Gandalf strode into the hobbit hole.

5.Jim was interested in the idea unless he called his friend.

6.Owls are nocturnal as this means the are active at night.The have excellent eyesight.