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Long, long ago there was a poor girl called Polly. She lived in a little bungalow, every day she would go down to the beach therefore she lived right next to it. Early one morning, Polly went for a walk but as a result she was in danger as she listened to a creepy sound. It sounded like a dinosaur screeching. So she walked more close to investigate what the sound was. As she walked closer she saw blood. So she ran for her life with her heart racing.


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