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Formal

Dear Sir

I am writing to inform you about the upcoming events on the local calendar. There are some magnificent things in the pipeline.

First, there will be a procession through the town, consisting of a wide variety of contributions. Anyone involved must take care not to get in the of the crowd or there will be an almighty row. The mayor will judge the best baby competition. While that is going on, you can also go down and grab a bite.

Next, there will be a dance display in the town square. If you will be attending please be free to go to the market because it will be open all afternoon.

Finally, the firework display will be held in Prince’s park at exactly six. We hope you have a wonderful time.

your faithfully,

Billy bob kramer

formality

Dear Sir

I am writing to you to inform you about the upcoming events on the local calendar. There are some fantastic things in the pipeline.

First, there will be a procession through the town consisting of a wide variety of contributors. Anyone involved must take good care not to get in the way of the crowds or there will be an enormous row of people. The mayor will judge the best babe composition. While that is going on, you could get yourself down to a very nice place where you could get some nice food.

After that there will be a dance display in the town square. If you are watching, please stand back so that you don’t get in the way. The markets will be open all afternoon.

Finally, the firework display will be held in the princes park at exactly six. We hope you all have a great time.

yours faithfully

billy bob Kramer

Formality

Dear sir,

I, am writing to you today to inform you about the upcoming events on the local Callander. There are some great things in the pipeline.

First, there will be a procession throughout the town, consisting of a wide variety of contributions. Anyone involved must take good not to get in the way of the horde or there will be an almighty row. The mayor will judge the best baby competition. While that’s going on , you could get your self down to a nice meal and take a rest.

After that, there will be a dance  display in the town square. If your watching ,please watch  out of the way so you don’t get hurt. The market will be open afternoon.

Finally, the firework display will be held in the prince’s park at precisely six. We hope you have an amazing time.

Yours, faithfully

Blog activities

Sir .

am writing to inform you about the upcoming events on the local calendar .there are some enthusiastic activities in the pipeline. Am sure some will interest you . You could be interested whit the people cultures and beliefs or maybe you might enjoy just a simple ride throughout the town .each of these are unique and interesting but before the activities there will be a procession through town , consisting of a wide variety of contributions . Anyone involved must take good care not to get in the way of the crowds or there will be an almighty row. The mayor will judge the best baby competition . While that is going on you could get yourself down to mr.chippys and grab a bite .

after that there will be a dance display in town square and if you’ll be watching your asked to not get in the way of the crowd or dancers the market will be opened all afternoon.

Finally , the fireworks display will be held in princes park  at exactly 6. We hope you have the most wicked of time.

Your faithfully

Billy bob cramer

To use cohesive and a range of sentence starters

Long, long ago the was a poor girl called Polly. She lived in a flat that was slowly starting to decay. There was also insects around her house like spiders and cockroaches. One time she heard a squeaky noise in her kitchen, so she went to check it out. Strangely enough, her picture of her dad, which was  the day before he died, had fell in the sink and weirdly had blood everywhere. After that, everything started to fall apart. All of the items that fell were everywhere: cutlery, plates, pans and cups and also in her bedroom; makeup, mirrors, plants and her wardrobe. She went downstairs to tellher neighbours but unexpectedly there were only zombies. Then she knew she was doomed. Forever.

To use cohesive and a range of sentence starters

Long, long ago the was a poor girl called Polly. She lived in a flat that was slowly starting to decay. There was also insects around her house like spiders and cockroaches. One time she heard a squeaky noise in her kitchen, so she went to check it out. Strangely enough, her picture of her dad, which was  the day before he died, had fell in the sink and weirdly had blood everywhere. After that, everything started to fall apart. All of the items that fell were everywhere: cutlery, plates, pans and cups and also in her bedroom; makeup, mirrors, plants and her wardrobe. She went downstairs to tellher neighbours but unexpectedly there were only zombies. Then she knew she was doomed. Forever.

Suspense story

However,long,long ago there was a poor girl called polly,she was walking her dog.Everthing seemed fine,infill it started to rain and thunder stayed to rage upon her,she and her dog ran to a safe shelter-it was late at night-she was shivering,her hands where completely numb;it was cold;everything started to fuzz and blur in her eyesight;then everything started to get dark:and polly and her dog closed one eye then another…

To use cohesion and a range of different devices

slowly, polly bent down. She was hoping that the ghost dogs hadn’t followed her to the graveyard. The thunder crashed against one of the graves and then boomed down against all the others. Suddenly the thunder stopped and the rain pored down. Slowly large hands emerged out of the graves. They had claws as sharp and long as knives placed on top of every single finger.  Then whatever was in the graves sat up they all then turned there faces towards her. When she could see them clearly she knew what was in the grave it was about 120 ghost dogs. There long pointed horns on all of there heads. She ran. But then pawed. She was starting at the gate into his large red eyes!

To use cohesion and a range of different devices

Long, long ago there was a girl called Polly. Every day Polly would go on a walk down by the park with her friends. They went on all the equipment: the swings, the slide and the monkey bars. Then they decided to go on a walk in the woods. After a few minutes they decided to stop and take have a snack. “I’m heading back.” said Max. “Ok.” said Polly and Jo. They continued. Polly heard a snap. She turns around and sees Jo lying on the floor twitching. She continues. Another snap. “Who’s there?” shouts Polly. Polly continues. Another snap…

Suspense story

However,long,long ago there was a poor girl called polly,she was walking her dog.Everthing seemed fine,infill it started to rain and thunder stayed to rage upon her,she and her dog ran to a safe shelter-it was late at night-she was shivering,her hands where completely numb;it was cold;everything started to fuzz and blur in her eyesight;then everything started to get dark:and polly and her dog closed one eye then another…