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Long, long ago the was a poor girl called Polly. She lived in a flat that was slowly starting to decay. There was also insects around her house like spiders and cockroaches. One time she heard a squeaky noise in her kitchen, so she went to check it out. Strangely enough, her picture of her dad, which was  the day before he died, had fell in the sink and weirdly had blood everywhere. After that, everything started to fall apart. All of the items that fell were everywhere: cutlery, plates, pans and cups and also in her bedroom; makeup, mirrors, plants and her wardrobe. She went downstairs to tellher neighbours but unexpectedly there were only zombies. Then she knew she was doomed. Forever.

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