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using conjucutions deterermines

Long long ago, polly was happy.early in the moring polly went for a walk.polly bent down to pick up a shiny  shell at the moment polly found the most beautiful  shell.i will grant you some wishes  chooses wisely called polly  in the little the  cottage the shell spoke

Writing in the Past Tense

Something was crawling up the sky ship’s wooden hull.

 

Ty, whose face paled, shrank back and ducked down behind the tiller but mariana rushed to the edge and peered into the loom belwoes 

 

She could just make out something  or somebody scrap below  the side of the ship.#

 

It was quite small and did have green eyes

 

It paused and stared back at her

 

It was a baby dragon she was crawling and was hurt in a storm 

Multi clause sentences

At 2 o’clock the car accelerated when it drove round the corner  and fastly came on a halt next to a red light.

 

At 5 o’clock slowly the dragon landed it was crawling and scarly  and stoped

 

At 1 o’clock Slowly the teacher stopped outside and then she picked up the griperly and ran back inside sprintedly  on the corridor

 

At 1 in the morning loudly, the starships hoverd into the air and aimed it’s lazer beams it’s flaming hot  at the moon 

Letter

Dear Mum,

I have arrived in the countryside now. The train journey was good and I even met a new friend called Harry. Harry even gave me some sweets so I gave him some chocolate in return. He kept on talking so I wouldn’t lose my mind . 

When we arrived, I was one of the last kids to be picked. The people who adopted me were very nice. They had a bathroom in their house and they even had carpet. They bought me some new clothes and gave me a full English breakfast to welcome me. I got a new foster brother and sister. They were very nice too and played with me all the time. When it came to bed time I got a bed all to myself. 

My new school was good. I got better at reading and writing which is how I’m writing this right now. 

Love you lots,

Yours sincerely,

Tim.

story sentences

Outside,the snow was coming down fastly.

 

Inside,everyone was chilling in the warm house.

 

Outside, the wind was blowing fastly.

 

Inside,the lights kept turning off and on.

 

Inside,the class was working quietly.

 

Outside, the trees was standing still.

 

Outside, the clean water was waving nicely.

 

Inside,everyone was sleeping nicely in the warm bed

 

Inside, people were playing games loudly.

 

Outside someone was having a barbeque. 

johns football

John walked to the muddy football pitch and his friend was there too. As soon as he arrived, his friends smiled happily. He was small and fast like a cheetah. 

“Morning, are you ready to play?” exclaimed John cheerfully.

Chapter 3

During  the night,  Zippy was getting really flustered. “We will never get out!” 

 

“Don’t worry, I am sure we will. Inopy, is that you?” 

 

“Yes!” said Inopy.  

 

“Can you try unlocking the door?”

 

“Yes I will see if I can find the key, it should be in the bedroom.” But he couldn’t find it. Sadly, they thought they had no hope at all, “Well I better get going or your aunt is going to catch me.”

 

Zippy kept trying to find an escape. They saw another key they tried but that didn’t work either. Charlie kept losing hope while Zippy kept trying. “Get up and help me!” said Zippy. 

 

“There is no point trying now, ” said Charlie.

 

She went to the door and kept trying to open it. “Please just help me Charlie for once,” Zippy got so mad he kicked the door. 

 

Just as Zippy was falling asleep, he heard a noise out of the window. She went and looked.  It was Inopy,  “How did you get up there?  My mean step aunty put me up here, just come here and I will give you some wind ups.” 

 

“What is happening?” said Charlie.

 

“It’s my macmhanimal,” said Zippy.

  

When Inopy was full of wind ups, a key dropped. Zippy went back to the attic door, tried it and it worked. Charlie looked left and right to make sure his aunty would not catch them and quickly ran.

middle of the night

 

Inop, the mechanimal, looked across the other side of his airship and noticed another ship chasing him. Inop noticed the airship following him had a harpoon pointing at him. There was a big bang as loud as a dinosaur’s roar. As the other ship landed, Inop smelt loads of smoke as he was coughing and spluttering. Spinning towards his master, Inop barked, “Master! What do you want me to do for you?”

 

Chapter 1

 

In the middle of the night, Zippy woke up. Everyone was still asleep. He crept to the door but it was locked. He went to the window and jumped out of Royal Boys Grammar School. He ran as fast as he could to get away from that school. He had a bit of money on himself so he ran towards the bus stop. He stopped to take a breath. One of the teachers saw him but it was too late, he was driving away.

 

Zippy noticed the note he had dropped on the floor. His mother and father had gone to jail. His eyes filled with tears. It was stuck in his head, why had they gone to jail? He remembered the last word his parents had told him i love you then his parents ran away

  

Zippy turned around and saw Inop, who must have followed him. “I’ve been hiding out in the forest for ages, oh come here and give me some ticks!” Inop said.

 

the daisy lion

The Daisylion

 

The Daisylion, when you go no near it, will roar as lound as a lion.

 

Really green, it blends in with the grass, same height, same length too.

 

The roots are like hundreds of tiny spider legs moving around stopping the daisylion from being stood on.

 

Its spiky petals like a nettle, sting people as they walk past.