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Contrasting Characters By Anabelle

Summer barged in through the door to her house. Outside the rain had been whipping in her face and the wind blowed her hair everywhere. “Mum, I’m home!” She shouted. “Hi Summer, how was your day at school?” Her mum asked. “Good thanks. What are we having for tea?”

Natalie walked in through the door into her kitchen, he hair soaking wet. “Hi mum.” She said grumpily. “Hi Natalie how was your day at school?”asked her mum. “Normal.” Natalie said grumpily to her mum. “Bring tea up to my room and then leave me alone.” And with that Natalie stomped upstairs.

Summer slumped down on her bed thinking about that conversation she”d had with that new girl Natalie. She kept playing it over and over in her head thinking what she should do… Meanwhile Natalie sat on her swivel chair and thought about that girl she had met at school today. “I wonder if she’ll do it with me” Natalie muttered quietly to herself. “After all she’s the only one I think I can trust.” She thought. Then before she could think any more about that she drifted of into a long, dreamy sleep.

The opposite twins

One day like any other a girl called Elsie was trying to get through another boring science lesson at school. She was sitting at her desk, not really paying attention when the school bell ran she leaped for joy and thought no more science till after summer break. Then she left the classroom and went to the supply cupboard which she knew is off limits to children.

As Elsie left the classroom her twin sister Mia saw her and she knew her sister was up to something. She thought what she could be doing. Mia was always the one who was well behaved and listened in class, she also never got in trouble. But this time was different she decided to follow her.

She saw he going to the supply cupboard the she said, ” What are you doing Elsie you know that’s of limits, ” said Mia.
” I am going to explore and you are coming with me, ” said Elise as she dragged Mia inside…

Character scene

It was a hot summer day, James was playing football in his yard with some of the new neighbours that just moved in. As he kicked the ball he noticed one of the new neighbours was sat alone reading Peter and the Star catchers. He had pale skin and mocha coloured short hair. As he looked over one of the boy’s brothers said,
” Don’t deal with that dork! He’s not worth the time!” So James went back to football and got hit in the face with the ball.

While Theo was reading his book, sat on the curb, his brothers were playing football with one of their neighbours. The boy had tanned skin(probably from playing football) and fiery orange hair.When Theo saw the neighbour looking over he buried himself in his book, the last thing he wanted to do was talk to him.

When Theo’s brothers went to play at the park James decided to say hi to Theo.
“Hi what’s your name?” James asked. 

“M-my n-name is Th-Th-Theo.”As James and Theo got to know each other Theo’s brothers returned,

“I didn’t know i hit a dork with a football!” Said one of Theo’s brothers laughing.Theo looked embarrassed but James was really annoyed and yelled

“WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!” The brothers ran off and planned something big to scare James…

Character description

As Jason ran outside, Douglas instantly pinned him against the wall. Jason squirmed trying to escape ,but it was no use Jason was stuck. Douglas pulled on Jason’s brown hair, “What are you going to do? Go cry to your mummy!”taunted Douglas. It wasn’t fare Jason thought to himself I’m smaller and weaker than him, even when Douglas had got suspended he comes back to school and carry’s on bullying me.

A few moments later, Steve strolled outside with the football while talking with his friends about last night’s mach. When he reached the pitch, he started playing football. Steve had an advantage over everyone else because he was a lot fitter and faster than any of them plus he was very tall, so when they were picking teams he was all ways the first to get picked.

As Steve ran to get the ball some thing caught his. Eye he saw Douglas bullying Jason, so he walked over to see what was going on Douglas had Jason pinned  against the wall. Steve then said “Hey Douglas, why don’t you pick on some as ugly as you are!”, Lala laughed.

The class day by Daisy

As Summer pranced into to classroom, she smiled while saying, “Good morning Mr Morris,” and happily sprinted to take her seat.

30 minutes later, Jacob came in, he slammed the door shut and then all eyes turned on him. He then mumbled, “Morin’n Mr Morris sorry I am late,” as he was slowly walking to his desk.

Surprisingly, Jake was partnered with Summer when he sat down she said, “Hello my name is Summer,”  then he said nothing he just stayed quite.

Contrasting Characters By Natasha

Atlantic crept into Mr Black’s maths class trying not to get any attention. Eyes were watching her every move.

“Why are you late, Miss Henswerth? You will have to make up for missing 30 minutes of my class during lunch.”

Atlantic replied with Mhm. Mr Black carried on with his lesson about Algebra. She swiftly got to her table at the back of the class. Eyes carried on watching her like they were stalking their prey. Atlantic dropped her bag by her chair quietly. She tried to focus, but couldn’t. Her brain was going over what had happened that night.

Korra barged in the class room, interrupting the lesson. 

“G’day sir! How you doing?”

” I was doing fine before you rudely interrupted.”

She threw her bag across the room by a empty place by the window. 

She put her bag on the white windowsill. Her blue bag fell, it landed in the water fountain. Korra nicked some else’s bag and pretended nothing had happened.Korra pulled a green notebook and a green pen out. Atlantic pulled her blue note book and pen, she started writing notes instead she started drawing mythical creatures. 

“Miss Henswerth? Miss Henswerth! What is this monstrosity!? This is again the rules for doodling in your notebook. This is for notes not drawings,” exclaimed Mr Black. He ripped the pages of the book and threw it in the opened bin. Korra was smirking she liked Atlantic getting into trouble. The class laughed at her. She felt like a clown.

” Thats enough class. We don’t want getting into more trouble. Do we?”

Character description

As Jason ran outside, Douglas instantly pinned him against the wall. Jason squirmed trying to escape ,but it was no use Jason was stuck. Douglas pulled on Jason’s brown hair, “What are you going to do? Go cry to your mummy!”taunted Douglas. It wasn’t fare Jason thought to himself I’m smaller and weaker than him, even when Douglas had got suspended he comes back to school and carry’s on bullying me.

A few moments later, Steve strolled outside with the football while talking with his friends about last night’s mach. When he reached the pitch, he started playing football. Steve had an advantage over everyone else because he was a lot fitter and faster than any of them plus he was very tall, so when they were picking teams he was all ways the first to get picked.

As Steve ran to get the ball some thing caught his. Eye he saw Douglas bullying Jason, so he walked over to see what was going on Douglas had Jason pinned  against the wall. Steve then said “Hey Douglas, why don’t you pick on some as ugly as you are!”, Lala laughed.

The classroom

Zac pushed his small little hands on the smooth wood door as he barged in. He was a little bit early and the teacher popped out of the classroom. As he slammed his bag on the floor with rage and sat down as he accidentally slammed his arm down on the desk.  Mr Clark entered the room saying, “What  was that” Speaking with rage Mr Clark could see that Zac was the only one there and there was a big dent in his desk.

Lenny entered the room walking as he limped slowly ” You alright ” said the teacher.”  Yes ,” he said in a sad tone. He sat down, put his bag on the floor and walked slowly to his  desk. The teacher watched him like a hawk Lenny sat down and stared at the wall teacher could tell that something was up “” come and speak to me at playtime ” said the teacher. 

Zac could see that Lenny was upset but he didn’t now why so at reading he put his book in front of his face and whispered, ” Lenny , Lenny “||”What” Lenny said ” Why are you upset ” said Zac  ” because my leg is incredibly sore. The  doctor said if this medication holding up a jar of pills  doesn’t work my leg is going to be amputated ” said Lenny sadly ” oh sorry to here that” said Zac.

Contrasting characters by Lenny

Gerry opened the class door and said, “How’s everyone feeling?” Everyone exclaimed, “GOOD THANK YOU!” He went and hung his coat up gently so he didn’t make a sound. He sat down and Mr Greenwood then told him what he was supposed to be doing.

A moment later, Tim barged open the door and shouted, “YOU GUYS ARE GETTING BULLIED TODAY!” No one took any notice because he says that everyday, but he never does. Mr Greenwood then asked politely, “Why are you late?” Tim then went up to Mr Greenwood’s ear and shouted, “I WAS BEATING UP MY BROTHER!” Mr Greenwood then said politely, “You’re missing all your play!” He didn’t seem to care.

Tim barged into the cloakroom and chucked his jacket on the damp, manky old floor. He then yanked his pencil out of his pencil case. He pretended that he was listening, but really he was daydreaming. Gerry was listening very carefully because he loved maths. Gerry ended up getting everything correct, but Tim got everything wrong. Mr Greenwood was very proud with Gerry. Mr Greenwood got really angry with Tim for getting everything incorrect.

Contrasting characters

James crept into the classroom careful for Mr Pi the maths teacher not to see him. 

“Sorry I’m late,” he mumbled as he slumped into the plastic chair which was to small for him. He waited for Mr Pi to tell him that he would make the time up in detention at lunch, yet it never came as Mr Pi just kept blabbering on about algebra. 

Ki slammed the door open making it nearly fall of its hinges. As he marched into the classroom, “Sorry i’m late,” He bellowed. He threw his bag down on the floor were the empty space was next to James.

” Hurghmph,” Ki Yelled as he threw himself into the chair nearly knocking Madison over. 

Ki stole a pencil from Madison’s table and wrestled a notebook from his bag. He began scribbling away in his note book waiting, waiting, waiting for the call for Mr Pi to tell him he was in detention. But when he turned around he just humphed and stared at Ki while Martha absorbed every word in like a sponge.