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The sky ship by jack

May stared at the skyship as it was falling into the abandoned forest. She ran to the forest in shock at what she witnessed.

Breaking down the fence “Warning someone is breaking in. Warning someone is breaking in.” The intercom shouted as she ran in.

“Hello” said May. No answer, she went into skyship by kicking down the door because it was locked. There was nobody inside she thought the pilot flew out of it she knew how to repair a hot air balloon, balloon. And made it fly again. Then suddenly a voice said “Hi am captin clark the owner of this sky ship” they set off

As they were in the sky the winds got heavier and heavier than the balloon flew away then Captain Clark screamed”we’re going down”

One Response to “The sky ship by jack”

  1. Hi jack I love your writing.
    1. I love the line she ran to the forest in shock.
    2. You can use something else then warning someone is breaking in two times.
    3. You could describe how she ran into the forest.

    From Charlie & Archie

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