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When Mrs. Stick woke up she told Me a story Mrs. Stick Said when the war started, I went into the forest. I was a teenager then when I was in a tree. I heard a crowd on the buses below. A black panther popped out there was A Cub, then it was so cute and then I brought it home Then I fed it. Then Winston was shocked with the story. It’s crazy how it’s grown over one year.

evacuee

 

Dear Mum,

Thanks for the little lunch you packed me. It was very nice; I ate most of it on the train. When I arrived at Sheffield I had to wait a couple of minutes before I got picked. Luckily, I got picked by a nice looking man and woman with a boy about the same age as me. After that I found out that the man was called John, the boy was Tom and the mum was Elizabeth.

I arrived at a farm and there was 12 chickens, 2 cows and 5 sheep. The chickens and started to poo and John went over and picked it up. I was disgusted. Then I realized that it was an egg in his hand!

My bedroom is in the attic with Tom’s. Luckily, there was a spare bed and a toilet inside the house- how lucky am I. Anyway Elizabeth can make brilliant types of eggs: scrambled, poached and fried. I normally have that for breakfast with a slice of toast. So good. They are very nice to me and luckily I don’t have to go to school for another week. Sadly, I have to do some work around the house but after that I can go play with tom and his friends.

I’m having a brilliant time I wish you could be here with me to share this amazing experience.

Miss you a lot

Lots of love

From your son,

Jack.

World War II

1943

Dear mum

Thank you for the gas mask in my little box. I walked onto the train with my friends. I found my seats and Right away, I started talking. When I got off I walked into a big school

when I walked in I went into a big hull and they told us to spread out. Then people came in and picked me. Then I went home with them.

When I got to the house, I went to my room and started crying. When I stop crying, I ate a apple.

My happiness

My Happiness is made from

Football scoring in the goal’

Freshly baked pizzas in the oven’

and the smell of golden fish

 

I found it-

In the glistening ocean

In the deep in a cave

The taste of the cakes in my mouth

 

my happiness can

make me kind and helpful.

 

Happiness

My happiness is made from-

the brightness of the sun,

the power of the gods,

the beauty of freedom

and the fun in a warm summer day.

I found it-

trapped in crammed box,

crumpled up like a piece of paper,

left by its self on a road being ignored.

My happiness can-

bring joy to everyone,

make evil hearts good,

bring smiles to faces

and can smooth the uncalm sea.

If I lost it- I would be a nobody

leaving everyone gloomy

and unable to help.

 

Blog challenge

Bob ran down the road but he fell over . The thunder roared so the hobbits hid . Bilbo slept in a cave so the goblins attacked. The cart came to a wheezing halt but Gandalf strode into the hobbit hole . Jim was interested in the idea so he rang his friends.

The Boat

The boat made of sheer metal

The boat made of sheer metal,
The deck is freezing cold,
The hull is impossible to break,
You don’t sleep on the deck, it’s too cold.

The boat made of sheer metal,
You relax while other people fish,
When a wave hits you don’t get hurt,
When you sleep you hear saliors.

The boat made of sheer metal,
Your surrounded by gold and silver,
You can go on the silver bridge,
And the sails get pushed against the wind.

The boat made of sheer metal,
Then yous see an Island ahead,
You stop for a while,
It’s so relaxing and calming

Next to the boat made of sheer metal,
The islands volcano erupts,
Your in the jungle whilst everyones running
You get hit and die

On The boat of sheer metal,
Survivors lurk around,
Your tying the rope,
And that’s a day of the boat

BY

The ship of celestial shards

The ship of celestial shards

On the ship of celestial shards,

Landed spectacular stars fragmented and apart

The deck dancing delicately in the moonlight

Shining brighter than light

On the ship of celestial shards,

Landed parts of planets as if they were celestial shards

Portholes were covered with semi suns slowly spinning

Blinding bunches of patient people

On the ship of celestial shards,

Landed majestic moon fragments

Shimmering in the sacred sail

The mystical mast making many movements

Made from many mysterious metals

On the ship of celestial shards,

Rained a shower of comets coming at the cozy cabins

Splashing spectacular waves into the deck

As the ship shook and swished

It finally reached the ground.

Jack (LR)

The ship of fear

on the ship of fear

sharks are curving through the water
barracuda eating fish

The silver sail boat moving around the sea

Birds soaring through the sky

fish in schools, glistening bye

The multi-coloured masks

Putting on the blue mask coloured like the sleek sea

I saw the sea as deep as could be,

I saw the smooth sky shooting up high,

I saw sadness slithering inside.

 

Putting on the pink mask as caring as a careful couple

I saw a lovely law,

I saw a helpful heart perfect for persistent people

I saw a door where people stay forever more

 

Putting on the black mask while hiding in the small shadows

I saw an onyx proving your not honest

I saw charcoal making my life fall

I saw mad marker making things darker

(by Jack, LR)