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Story’s

In the morning , the car accelerated on the M6 and drove round the corner slyly and came to a halt angrily.

Yesterday the dragon  landed in the larva crawled towards the school suspiciously and came to a halt at the sight of the trunch ball  .

Today the starship hovered in the sky aimed its laser beams slyly and fired angrily .

Tom-blog challenge

As the snow fell,Tom waited in his flat then the phone rang .Tom picked up the phone and looked worried for a seceond.Tom dashed across the room , he grabbed his suitcase and Ran outside.

Tom waited

As the snow fell,Tom waited in his flat, the phone rang and he picked it up,he listened then crossed the room to pick up the suitcase, after that he opened the door and went outside.

Blogging activity

The snow fell as Tom waited in his flat.Then, the phone rang and he picked it up to his ear and listened to what they had to say.Tom walked to the other side of the room and gripped his suitcase in his hand, he then opened the door and went outside.

Toms paragraph

The snow fell as Tom waited by the door of the flat. Then the phone rang as Tom leaned over the window, he picked it up and listened to his friend. Tom picked up the nearby suitcase when leaving the door and walked outside.

Tom

The snow fell so Tom waited in his flat and the phone rang he picked it up.so he listened Tom put the phone down and when across the and pick up the suitcase Tom open the door and when outside.