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Tom

The snow fell heavily on the roof. Tom waited for breakfast. He was in the flat then, the phone rang so Tom picked it up. When he listened to the person. Tom crossed the room to pick up his suitcase, he then opened the door and went outside.

Tom in the snow

As the snow fell Tom waited patiently for the weather to pass. He was in the flat as the phone rang, so Tom picked it up. As he held the phone by his ear, he nervously waited for the short tempered, stubby, little boss of his to start screaming. Tom crossed the room dragging the suitcase behind him. The door was opened wide and he heard the first crunch of snow beneath his foot.

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As the snow fell Tom waited he was in a flat the phone rang it was scary he picked it up he listened he crossed the when Tom crossed the room it was scary he opened the door . he went outside.

Tom waited

The snow fell while Tom waited. He was waiting for what felt like years in the small apartment. The phone rang, he rushed for the phone and listened. He walked across the room and picked up the suitcase and left.

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The snow fell as Tom waited in the flat in case the phone rang, when he picked it up, he listened then Tom walked across the room, so he picked up his suitcase and then Tom opened a door and went outside

Tom waited

As the snow fell Tom waited at in the flat.His phone rang he picked it up and listened. He ran across the room picking up his suitcase he opened the door and he ran outside.

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As the snow fell Tom waited in his flat.The phone rang he went to picked it up to his ear and listened into the phone.He crossed the the room to pick up the suitcase.Tom came to the door and went outside.