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Mr snowman come inside

100 word challenge 

 

Dear mr Snowman, 

 

Please come out of the cold I have a luxurious hot chocolate waiting for you or frosted shreddies for breakfast “oh snowman please come inside”

I have a warm fire a toasty bath for you please come inside snowman don’t freeze if you come in I can give you something better than the warmth love mr snowman if you come in you can dance and sing

If you come in I will be kind and caring for you so please mr snowman come inside we can party and have fun,

 

Yours sincerely Jack.R

chapter 2 a warning disobaed

Chapter 2

A warning disobeyed 

 

“Do not touch my book,” Neil the shop owner sinerstley said, as spit fell on Charlies blushed cheek.

“Ok,” said a scared voice from charlie.

And Neil left the room in a loud thud.

 

As soon as Neil left the room Charlie eyed paintings in the hallway And the objects, But before Charlie knew it There was a dip pen and the scroll was ,beautiful it, Pictures of ; Cool beaches Banks full of gold lands of sweets everything you could ever imagine there’s a picture in the scroll the Scroll was a tissue like substance 

 

As Charlie was Holding the ; Jet black smooth dip in her own was no longer listening to Charlie’s brain and drawing as fast as she could think Results seem to be A tropical beach with a bridge all the way to a hut floating on the sea Object or something said “this way master” as it lead the way to a door it was door 44 the robot pushed a button and the door flew forward to the front of the hallway and the door 3 went where number 44 was and that was the one that Neil the emporium owner went through.

 

The door Charlie created was a world full of sea water sunset and plants. The room/ world was as beautiful as you could imagine you could taste the sea salt in the air it had ; the most beautiful shore line as the sunsets that shone brightly at her eye and shimmered back it was exactly how she imagined it.

The somewhere emporium

The somewhere emporium

 

There are some areas that humans are not supposed to go this is about someone who did enter one of these places

 

Even though the wondrous framework

Of the emporium It was decorated Is the brightest most beautiful lights the finest most antique old pieces of wool and material it had the feeling Christmas Eve and Waking up With present and the sweetest smell of crisps frying. 

 Although there were amazing component in the shop people never entered The shop, like it would take everything from you The deep velvet red curtains shimmered with the smallest golden sequins. Nobody ever entered until Charlie did

 

Chapter one 

Through the door

 

Charlie was speeding down the street rushing to find shelter Charlie The door is open on the Old building that glew up in Golden bulbs, lights it read the somewhere Emporium.

Charlie Curiosity getting the better of this moment, went inside and instantly towards it and looked around the room it was decorated with old antique banners and flags with a golden wallpaper with red stripes golden backyard and black base. There was charlies favourite bird, a blue jay bird. It stood proudly beside the green old toy solders .as Charlie inspected the old scroll a murmured voice hissed

“Cant you read no touching the items”

“Oh s s sorry” a fragile high pitched voice replied. 

As charlie inspected the old man 

He wore a nametag that read Neil.

He had brown hair and a grey beard

He had green fisherman trousers and a navy blue fleece he had a green eye and a blue eye