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session 8

Long Long ago, in a strange, little cottage there was a poor girl.Though she was poor, Polly was happy. Polly went for a walk and she found beautiful flat shells, curved coloured the shell spoke. “ I will grant you two wishes so choose wisely!”

 

Early one morning, Polly found the most beautiful shell, which glistened in the sun, lying next to a rock pool! Polly bent down to pick up the shel

Tenses

Something was crawling up the side of the skyship’s wooden hull! Ty, whose face paled,shrunk back and ducked down behind the tiller but Mariana rushed to the edge peered into the gloom below. She could just make out something or somebody scrambled up the side of the ship. It was quite small and had green eyes. It paused and stared back up at her. “ It’s a baby dragon”, she called and it hurt. “ Mariana whose brow frownd with concentration reached down to grip its outstretched paw and pulled it onto the deck.” It will hurt in the storm.

cojuction

Before Bob ran, He fell over. 

 

 

The thunder roared while, The hobbits hid.

 

Bilbo slept in the cave after, the goblins hid attacked.

 

The cart came to a wheezing halt while, Gandalf stode into the hobbit hole.

 

Jim was interested in the idea while he rang his friend.

 

Owls are nocturnal This means they are active at night because, they have excellent eyesight.

Story sentences

  1. Inside,  the neatly tidy classroom at school that went to a mess.

 

  1. Inside, the house the fireplace was eating the house. 

 

  1. Inside, the tall treehouse it was windy.

 

  1. Outside, the waves peacefully raised. 

 

  1. Outside, the forest trees  was slowly falling down.

 

  1. Outside, it was snowing heavily.

Chapter 3

The door locked behind them. They were stuck. Dottie was annoyed at Bob because he wasn’t helping Dottie find an escape route. There might be a trap door somewhere. There might be holes in a door or wall.  

 

Angrily, Dottie spun around and said, “Bob! Stop being annoying and help, now!” 

 

“Fine,” said Bob.

 

Just as Dottie was about to go to sleep, she heard a soft knock from the tiny window. She opened her eyes and gazed outside. Looking back at her she saw Clockeye’s pretty eyes. Sleepily, Clockeye barked, “Come on! Give me some wind up will you?”

 

When Clockeye was charged up, she spat out a key. “Time to get out of this place.” Slowly, Dottie turned and looked at the whole key then looked at the door and saw a small hole for the key to open the door. The door opened and they ran up the steep grassy hill that had beautiful flowers away from the house and towards freedom.

BirdDog

Bird Dog

 

Interestingly, the Bird Dog has soft feathers like an eagle. In addition, the feisty creature has claws like shark teeth.

The Bird Dog has a burrow in the forest that is pitch black inside. Also, it hunts mice, pigs and sheep. The Bird Dog is 3 feet tall and has white feathers which means it can fly though the sky.

The daisy berry

The DaisyBerry

 

The bright red DaisyBerry was the best flower at football, his friends called him the goat.

 

It had berries as soft as a pillow, as bright as  a yellow and black bee.

 

The roots were like delicate spider webs under the colourful stem.

 

The stem was as magical as a glowing rainbow. 

 

At night, the berry’s were glowing up like shooting stars.

 

The petals were as sharp as shark teeth snapping at shocked butterflies.

The funnest poem

In the land of Powerland, I saw a rockstar flying in the baby blue sky.

 

In the land of Powerland, I touched a bunny as soft as a pillow.

 

In the land of Powerland, I heard a baby bird tweet in a beautiful tree.

 

In the land of powerland ,I felt a baby blue bird on my shoulder.

 

In the land of powerland, I watched man united play against liverpool and man united lose 3 nil.

 

In the land of powerland,I found a moose walking across the road.

 

In the land of powerland , I captured a pheasant with my grandad.