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In the cold, snowy night, in the middle of the ocean, when the water was crashing on the rocks:where nobody saw a thing.Then i saw three birds flying around;Turnstone,Dunlie and Curlewin the sky…

The sea was splashing onto the path and the( wind was crashing around) Then … a high- pitched sound was growing louder and   louder until the wave stopped for a second and they started again. Nobody was  there , I saw a  man standing there, what are you doing here at this time of night.

 

Sort the Tenses

Something was crawling up the side of the skyship’s wooden hull! Ty, whose face was pale, shrunk back and ducked down behind the tiller but Mariana rushed to the edge and peered into the gloom below. She just made out something or somebody scuttle up the side of the ship. It was quite small and had green eyes. It slowly peered and stared back up at her. “It’s baby dragon,’’ she called, “and they are hurt!’’ Mariana, whose brow frowned with concentration, reached down to grip its outstretched paw and pulled it onto the deck.

The Dragon and the Tiger

In the land of Neverbelieve, I found a dangerous dragon on the road with a terrifying tiger, looking out at Dragon Land.

 

In the land of Neverland, I heard a big, brave boy who was riding a sticky, slippery dragon.

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I touched a slippery dragon who owned the King and Queen.

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I saw a pink peacock in the water splashing.

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I captured a venomous snake looking at me.

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I sang a sweet song to a tiger.

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I watched a big lion. She was strolling down the road with a triumphant tiger.

 

In the land of Neverbelieve, I felt a touch on my hand. The baby tiger’s paw was on mine.