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In the cold, snowy night, in the middle of the ocean, when the water was crashing on the rocks:where nobody saw a thing.Then i saw three birds flying around;Turnstone,Dunlie and Curlewin the sky…

The sea was splashing onto the path and the( wind was crashing around) Then … a high- pitched sound was growing louder and   louder until the wave stopped for a second and they started again. Nobody was  there , I saw a  man standing there, what are you doing here at this time of night.

 

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