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Chapter 2 by Maxim

I start asking the girl what happened. She explains that she has seen a fisherman bowing down to the Gori-Mander. I decided to sneak up a little bit closer to them to eavesdrop. Until the freak (who is the Gori-Mander) saw me, so I decided to run away and come to you. I asked her what her name was, she replied “Beatrix Thornfield, but you can call me Bea.” Then she asked me what  my name was,

I responded “Jeffery Apple, but you can call me Jeff.” We shook hands. Then I gave her a spare pillow and a mattress to sleep on, she appreciated it. Beatrix asked me want to hunt down the Gori-Mander and his minion. For a couple of seconds I was thinking to myself, should I go, I might die, but I might be in the history books. I decided to go with her, but first I put on a waterproof coat and walking boots.

We went outside and we saw lightning in the distance, it started raining. I thought that it was going to flood because there was a lot of rain. Today wouldn’t be a nice day eating Fish n Chips. The sand started to become really sodden which meant it would be very syrupy. Beatrix was in trainers and they were a bit big, so her trainers kept going of her foot due to the stickiness. I felt enormous hail stones landing on my head, we were adjacent to the pier, so we hid under it. The fog began to close in and it became thicker and thicker. Beatrix told me. “Is it just me or do you see big yellow eyes?” 

“Yes, is that the Gori-Mander!” I replied. RUN!! We started running as fast as the wind. We were jumping over the sticks lying on the sticky beach. I imagined that this was Subway Surfers, but in real life. We were quickly getting exasperated and Violet was quickly abating down. I looked back and the Gorilla-Mander was gone. The sun was rising and it stopped raining. We decided to watch the sunrise.

Chapter 2 by Maxim

I start asking the girl what happened. She explains that she has seen a fisherman bowing down to the Gori-Mander. I decided to sneak up a little bit closer to them to eavesdrop. Until the freak (who is the Gori-Mander) saw me, so I decided to run away and come to you. I asked her what her name was, she replied “Beatrix Thornfield, but you can call me Bea.” Then she asked me what  my name was,

I responded “Jeffery Apple, but you can call me Jeff.” We shook hands. Then I gave her a spare pillow and a mattress to sleep on, she appreciated it. Beatrix asked me want to hunt down the Gori-Mander and his minion. For a couple of seconds I was thinking to myself, should I go, I might die, but I might be in the history books. I decided to go with her, but first I put on a waterproof coat and walking boots.

We went outside and we saw lightning in the distance, it started raining. I thought that it was going to flood because there was a lot of rain. Today wouldn’t be a nice day eating Fish n Chips. The sand started to become really sodden which meant it would be very syrupy. Beatrix was in trainers and they were a bit big, so her trainers kept going of her foot due to the stickiness. I felt enormous hail stones landing on my head, we were adjacent to the pier, so we hid under it. The fog began to close in and it became thicker and thicker. Beatrix told me. “Is it just me or do you see big yellow eyes?” 

“Yes, is that the Gori-Mander!” I replied. RUN!! We started running as fast as the wind. We were jumping over the sticks lying on the sticky beach. I imagined that this was Subway Surfers, but in real life. We were quickly getting exasperated and Violet was quickly abating down. I looked back and the Gorilla-Mander was gone. The sun was rising and it stopped raining. We decided to watch the sunrise.

The naughty pizza by Maxim

I’d like you to imagine a naughty pizza running away

from a bakery store 

I’d like you to visualise a pizza running 

In the Olympics when its not 

supposed to 

I’d like you to name this pizza, your pizza

Now please fill in this survey: 

Has your pizza ever cried?

When will it play for a amazing football club?

Is your pizza a cheese pizza?

Will your pizza ever fly in the bright, blue sky?

Does your pizza have a driving license?

to drive a Porsche Carrera GT?

Where will your pizza retire as

the world’s most dangerous criminal?

Could your pizza escape a shop again?

Has your pizza ever tasted cotton candy?

Did your pizza go to jail? 

What is your pizza’s favourite movie?

Does it prefer Xbox or PlayStation?

My Imagination in a week by Maxim

On Monday, I found a untouched box of chocolate

lying next to a huge oak tree.

On Tuesday, I walked to Healy Nab to try and find an old,haunted house 

in the dark, lonely woods.

On Wednesday, I saw a dartford warbler flying across the canal,

searching for his family like a little ducklings trying to find his family in the sunlight.

On Thursday, I touched the snowflakes levitating above the ground 

whilst having a snowball fight with my friends.

On Friday, I tasted the worlds best ice-cream according to Bob the worlds best ice-cream sculpturer who said the flavour was elephant flavour.

On Saturday, I heard a van arriving in my neighbourhood waiting to sell glorious and delicious 

ice-cream on a nice, sunny day.

On Sunday, I dreamed of a brand new xbox, a house the size of Healy Nab, a car which is the most authentic car in the world.

Pairs of sentences by Maxim

Outside, the rain drooled. Inside, the kids were devastated.

Outside, the sun shone. Inside, people were joyful about the sun coming.

Outside, the snow fell silently. Inside, the kids were jumping about.

Outside, hail fell strongly on the ground. Inside, people were sad they couldn’t go outside.

Outside the skyscraper, people were making loud noises. Inside, the business men were disturbed by the loud riot.

Blog challenge session 3 by Maxim

Bob ran down the road and he fell over, so he started crying.

The thunder roared, so the hobbits hid, but the storm was to strong.

Bilbo slept in a cave before the goblins attacked.

The cart came to a wheezing halt, so Gandalf strode into the hobbit whole, for extra protection.

Jim was interested in the idea, so he rang his friend and his friend said “well done.”

Since owls have excellent eyesight, this means they are active at night, so owls are nocturnal.

Session 4 Blog Challenge

The snow fell, so Tom waited while he was in his flat. The phone rang, so he picked it up and Tom listened. After he crossed the room, Tom picked up the suitcase, so he opened the door and went outside.

Although there was no one there, I played my trombone.

In case It was scary , I bought a gas mask.

Whenever there was an odd sound, I played my music louder.

The teacher by Maxim

As soon as the jubilant Mrs Jones promenading into year seven, the familiar room suddenly turned joyful. She was averaged sized with the best smile of the century.” Settle down children,” Mrs Jones said cheerfully,” Its time to have fun learning!”

The teacher by Maxim

As soon as the jubilant Mrs Jones promenading into year seven, the familiar room suddenly turned joyful. She was averaged sized with the best smile of the century.” Settle down children,” Mrs Jones said cheerfully,” Its time to have fun learning!”