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The Mystical Mine by Samiul

John walked across the road as he saw nothing, as he walked further he came across a mystical mine. John entered and and in front of him was a pic-axe covered in thick red blood. He picked up the pic-axe, which he thought could keep him safe from the spooky skeletons. John slowly walked across the mine finding a note saying”Someone is disturbing the countryside, this creature comes everywhere when I’m alone, I never saw him again” The note gave John shivers down his spine.He found lots of crystals but they have been smashed into cracks. Silently, a portal appeared out of nowhere. Then there was a shadow with a teddy bear face. John noticed it and got his pic-axe ready.

Candy land by Wafa

Joy walked through candy land, she noticed candy lands castle and went inside. As she did she gasped. She saw a room  with graves and water made out of blood. Joy entered a room that said DANGER!!!DO NOT ENTER but Joy ignored the note. As she entered there was a portal leading to nowhere. There was a table, and on the table there was a dead person with blood dripping down. Joy was shocked she was shivering with fear. She entered the next room, there were bean bags and another note that said “if you sit on this you will die,” Joy had goosebumps all over her body and she freaked out. Suddenly she heard something. It sounded like the queen coming. Joy quickly hid under the table. 

Candy land by Wafa

Joy walked through candy land, she noticed candy lands castle and went inside. As she did she gasped. She saw a room  with graves and water made out of blood. Joy entered a room that said DANGER!!!DO NOT ENTER but Joy ignored the note. As she entered there was a portal leading to nowhere. There was a table, and on the table there was a dead person with blood dripping down. Joy was shocked she was shivering with fear. She entered the next room, there were bean bags and another note that said “if you sit on this you will die,” Joy had goosebumps all over her body and she freaked out. Suddenly she heard something. It sounded like the queen coming. Joy quickly hid under the table. 

Candy land by Wafa

Joy walked through candy land, she noticed candy lands castle and went inside. As she did she gasped. She saw a room  with graves and water made out of blood. Joy entered a room that said DANGER!!!DO NOT ENTER but Joy ignored the note. As she entered there was a portal leading to nowhere. There was a table, and on the table there was a dead person with blood dripping down. Joy was shocked she was shivering with fear. She entered the next room, there were bean bags and another note that said “if you sit on this you will die,” Joy had goosebumps all over her body and she freaked out. Suddenly she heard something. It sounded like the queen coming. Joy quickly hid under the table. 

Planet Zooglebergeljinkerdoodle By Humna

Bog Zog had been walking for hours. He did not like it at all , Firstly he was chained up for no reason

( But he escaped so he is okay ) Secondly he was SOAKED by the heavenly beautiful brave rain.

Third he was tired, So he decided to look for a house. He didn’t care if it was bad quality or good quality

all he wanted was a house. Meanwhile, he started to see a old rusty house in the distance. ” Finally ”

he thought. He peered through the door hole, Nobody was there, so he crept in. It was full of bubbling

potions and tools and machines and other tiddly items that you could imagine.  Perhaps it was a lab?

Well it certainly looked like one. ” Woah! ” said Bog Zog turning round and round like a ballet dancer.

All of a sudden a note appeared on the entrance. He read it. It said 5%^$&FGHF^&.

“Huh?”  said Bog Zog, puzzled he did not know what to do…….

The thought by Dylan TJS

The old abandoned house towered over Bob as he cautiously entered in. The morning geese continued to squawk at him like protesters, but thankfully the walls insulated the sound, so he could concentrate on finding his beloved sister.The sun pierced through the worn blinds like lasers of yellow, but nevertheless he continued to be haunted by his sister’s empty bed. Lilly, Bob’s sister, was loved by most of her family, Bob the most, but she would have never ran away, which made Bob question himself “could she have ran away because I didn’t share my ice cream or because she was in a bad mood?” but Bob realised, she didn’t want to run… she needed to.

 

 

Her last day

Lara stared at the massive house  it was oppersit her house she decided to knock but no one answered but instead the door busted open  there was no one inside instead there was a ripped curtain. The carpet stank like someone had died she entered the living room there was a old tv,sofa,desk,chair and a ancient chandler it was covered with cob webs on the desk was blood  and a knife . She ran out the room with fright sh stood in the hallway suddenly there was a noise coming from the upstairs room suddenly a boom was coming closer then………………………………………………..

The thought by Dylan TJS

The old abandoned house towered over Bob as he cautiously entered in. The morning geese continued to squawk at him like protesters, but thankfully the walls insulated the sound, so he could concentrate on finding his beloved sister.The sun pierced through the worn blinds like lasers of yellow, but nevertheless he continued to be haunted by his sister’s empty bed. Lilly, Bob’s sister, was loved by most of her family, Bob the most, but she would have never ran away, which made Bob question himself “could she have ran away because I didn’t share my ice cream or because she was in a bad mood?” but Bob realised, she didn’t want to run… she needed to.

 

 

Trapped by Harrison

Dennis peered around the decaying wall at an ancient, abandoned mine. The gigantic door flew open; a skin and bones boy was lying on the floor; a flesh eating rat scuttled around the mine. The air smelt of sick, like moldy vegetables. In the thin distance, Dennis could hear a trapper desperately trying to open the heavy door, the screaming of a child trying to get free of the grasps of the perilous mine cart and the bats flying around the deep, dark tunnel. Underneath Dennis’ feet, he felt something, something tickling him, something itching him, something hurting him… He looked down to see what it was… He let out a tremendous scream, “AHHHHH!”

Trapped by Myemuna

Rosie peered around, with tear drops running down her face, at the mysteriously dark mine. The mighty door flung open, a fragile child stumbled to her feet, afraid of the harmful rats scurrying in every direction. The air smelt toxic and damp. In the distance, no light to be seen, came the sound of a raging miner shouting abuse, a trappers sing song keeping them awake and the silent screams of the children crying for help. On her neck, Rosie could feel sharp pains, something scratching, something biting, something painful… “What was that?” she wondered.