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Advice for Eton Mask

Eton Mask’s City Advice 

Hi Eton, I was just going to give you some advice on how to make your own city. My first piece of advice is that you must take everyone’s opinion into account. Even if that means changing the plans of the city. You need to try and get everyone to compromise on one or two ideas. You need a lot of very good architects to accomplish your mission. You will need a certain amount of land to build this smashing city. It will need a strong government too. Good luck on this. 

Yours Sincerely 

Ciaran Moncrieff 

Finn Russell’s Bag

Finn Russell’s Bag  

I was on a flight going to watch the rugby world cup in France, when I saw that the Scotland squad was on my plane.  I froze in amazement, I just realised that I was about to talk to one of my favourite players, Finn Russell. Instead of talking to him, I thought I might have a rummage through his bag, I found, tickets to the game, a captain’s armband, a passport and a phone. But then I saw there was a secret pocket with something in strange it, I saw what it was froze in terro

What I found in my teachers cupboard

What I found in My Teachers Cupboard 

You will not believe what I found in my teachers cupboard. Before I tell you, you must promise not to tell anyone. It is top secret and I could get in big trouble if he found out I knew. My teacher is a spy! I found out when I was getting my rugby ball out the cupboard when I saw something that chilled me to the bone. Their was a sheet of paper that said, SUCCESFUL SPY. I saw a gun, a special hat and some secret codes.  

KEEP THIS SECRET! 

From Ciaran 

I made a gold making machine

100-word Challenge 

 

I have just invented the most amazing thing; it is a machine that turns water into gold. Not to brag, but I am already the richest man ever. I have unlimited gold bars and coins and I have recently been testing out making the things like laptops or phones using the gold. Funny thing is everybody wants the machine. I am currently hiding in an underground bunker as the press and journalists are swarming around my house as I type. I am so famous like; everyone just wants my money. I want my mummy. 

From Ciaran  

 

P.S LOADED!! 

 

From St Patricks Primary Scool

If my dog could talk

If my dog could speak. 

The other day, I was taking my dog on a walk along the beach, he was making a lot of strange sounds. It was like he was muttering under his breath and talking to himself. I stopped just outside my house to see if I could make out any words, but by then he had stopped. When I got home, I went straight into the back room and started to watch TV. As I started to relax, Hugo started this muttering thing again. Then he said this, “Switch the channel over, this programme’s so boring!”  

Why I forgot my homework

100 Word Challenge 

Reasons I didn’t hand in my homework. 

I’m very sorry Miss, but I didn’t hand in my homework. Perhaps: 

  • My dog ate it; 
  • My sister has taken it by mistake because she thought it was hers; 
  • Maybe, there was an alien invasion, just at my house when everyone was sleeping, and they thought my homework was some sort of treasure map. 
  • I might have been burgled last night and they wanted to sell my homework, because you never know, it might be worth something. 
  • It grew legs and escaped. 
  • Or I might have possibly, maybe forgotten it. 

Jacks apology letter

Dear Giant

 

I am ever so sorry that I stole your golden egg. I don’t know what came over me. I might have wanted to steal and then sell the egg, and then you would think someone else had stolen your egg. But I am owning up to it because I feel really very bad about what I did. I felt good when I stole it, but then I just felt worse and worse as the days went by. I was really worried that if you found me you would eat me.  I hope you accept my apology.

From Jack