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Chapter 4: The Chat

Trying desperately hard to ignore the beast’s roar,  Crystal dashed  towards the door. She paused, she was sure the door was there before. Instead, there was the waterfall that was covered with flowers. Without thinking, she jumped in and she saw the door and she opened it. Crystal was back into the Emporium.

Quietly, Crystal tiptoed back and glanced through the curtains. Mr Crouch was right in front of her. ” Ah I knew you would come back,” smiled Mr Crouch. Crystal looked down at her feet thinking if she should have done this. ” The thing is you are welcome to these dimensions in this shop, but never go back to change the past. So you see, you can visit my Emporium “, explained Mr Crouch.  He finished polishing  the table and said ” Come another day,”holding the door open.

Crystal stepped quietly down the street. She peered over to see the Emporium but there was nothing there, It had disappeared into thin air.  Crystal felt a shiver of magic through her spine, and shuddered and walked home. However she didn’t  realise that a Phoenix was following her home.

Chapter 4:leaving the galaxy Emporium

Trying to ignore the beast’s scream as security captured it, James dashed towards where the door that leads back to the Emporium stood. However, as he got closer, James realised the door was gone! Instead, there was a portal stuck on to a brick wall. James dived into the portal and entered back into the galaxy Emporium.

James stepped into the shop. Mr Roman was staring right at him. “Did you enjoy the football match?”asked Mr Roman. “Yes,”replied James. “The thing is,”explained Mr Roman,” you can visit any world in this Emporium, but you need to learn how to understand them.” “Okay,”replied James. “I’m going home for a day or two. I am sure my parents are worried about me,”said James.

James stepped into Mr Giordmaina road. He turned around to have one last look at the galaxy Emporium, but it was gone! Instead, there was a mini Tesco that stood in the place that the teal blue door once stood. As James walked home, there was a falcon that followed him all the way home that he didn’t know about.

The monster by Irfan

It was stunning , Daniel could see a rusty white path  metal path going in a  blue portal .Inside  he could see a deadly dragon a door was attached open and Daniel”s heart was beating Rapidly. Silently as a mouse, Daniel stepped inside and saw bloods on a knife.

Then he heard some footsteps it was coming from the basement it felt like a guy with a knife on him. Daniel closed the door of the basement the guy was his ********* he ran to his room his heart was beating Rapidly.

All of a sudden, Daniel heard footsteps again.He slowly walked  to his room eager the monster had 10 sky blue sharp teeth  10 spikes he blushed to the beast his colour was sky blue.

The beast by Rion

It was glamorous, Jake could see a rusty old path so |Jake followed the path until he came across a cabin that’s covered because it is covered in branches and snails and leaves. 

Then Jake heard a noise it sound like a CRASH it sounded like a helicopter had hit the cabin. Jake thought he was being stalked so Jake said “HELLO ANYONE THERE.” But all he heard was his echo.

All of a sudden, Jake heard a growl.  He hid under the sinking  sticky stairs then the barbarian beast showed itself. It had big blue bulging bumpers, its palm was the size of King Kong’s head.

 

Chapter 3 The Football Players by Zayan

Izuku Midoriya stepped inside the room. He could see bloody spikes, shadows crawling on the wall like a spider and dead bodies walking. Cob webs in every corner and on the lockers.

All of a sudden, Izuku Midoriya heard a loud bang it sounded like a monster dragging people and breaking peoples bones. It was like a human squishing a ************ what he felt when he was breaking peoples bones, and it was very very brutal.

A moment later, Izuku Midoriya heard the loud bang again. He went towards where the loud bang came.He saw a humongous monster, that had blood dripping  from his mouth and he had bloody fearless spikes on his back. He also had big scarlet eyes but he didn’t only have one scarlet eye he he had three

He went back up stairs again. After a while he went back down and the monster was gone also there was a giant crack on the wall.

The door by Masiyat

It was magnificent, Crystal could see flowers blooming in the horizon. She went closer to the edge of the forest. She saw a waterfall dripping with dozen’s of coins; an apple tree growing in the daylight; a Phoenix  fluttering as fast as a blink of an eye; the sun dancing around the clouds; and a mural  of a shop on the rock wall.

Suddenly, she heard a THUD! It was coming from the edge of the trees. Crystal now felt like some thing or someone was watching her every move. It was like a giant marching down the Hill Of Grass. Crystal paused and listened thinking she would hear the thud.  She couldn’t hear anything except the coins dripping  in the waterfall.

A second later,  Crystal heard the THUD! (again). She dashed through the forest eager to go back home, as her heart was beating like crazy. She stopped.  She saw it,  the person who made the noise or was it even a person.  An enormous figure with blood shot eyes; his claws moving closer with spiked fur; the body was deadly and covered in scales. Crystal could not blink, she stood as still as a statue. She dashed through the  forest trying to find the door. She could hear the monster behind her. She tripped.

 

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It was amazing, Mia could see a dusty grey brick path stretching into the horizon. The door was open and Mia’s heart was beating louder than ever! Slowly, Mia stepped inside and saw: plants and a table with a piece of cake on it, a normal story book, and a cabin.

Then she heard a BOOM! it was coming from within the plant. It felt like someone was spying on her. It sounded like Hulk had lost his temper! Mia paused and stared at the plant. She was shocked when she saw nothing was there. Only a tumbleweed.

Suddenly, Mia heard a BOOM! again. She ran slowly to the forest eager to find out what was making that noise. It was then that she saw it: a HUGE! fury monster, but it wasn’t a monster it was a human, half covered in blood! Mia was afraid so she sprinted a cross the room out of the forest and onto the path.

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It was amazing, Mia could see a dusty grey brick path stretching into the horizon. The door was open and Mia’s heart was beating louder than ever! Slowly, Mia stepped inside and saw: plants and a table with a piece of cake on it, a normal story book, and a cabin.

Then she heard a BOOM! it was coming from within the plant. It felt like someone was spying on her. It sounded like Hulk had lost his temper! Mia paused and stared at the plant. She was shocked when she saw nothing was there. Only a tumbleweed.

Suddenly, Mia heard a BOOM! again. She ran slowly to the forest eager to find out what was making that noise. It was then that she saw it: a HUGE! fury monster, but it wasn’t a monster it was a human, half covered in blood! Mia was afraid so she sprinted a cross the room out of the forest and onto the path.

Chapter 3:The football match.By Karan TPS year 3

It was amazing, James could see a kitchen with chefs that were making pasta and spaghetti for extra players. His heart was beating rapidly. James saw three more things:a colossal screen made out of sponge cake, pasta shells serving food and drinks, and sweaty spaghetti.

THUD! A goal fell forward.There was a scream from a football player. James heard the noodles detaching themselves from each other. Then, the noodles started slithering out of the way for something.

James dashed down to the field. All he saw was a string of noodle, but no ordinary noodle. It had eight eyes, arms and legs made out of spaghetti, and a mouth filled with tomato sauce.”I didn’t draw this in the book of wonders,”shivered James. The beast was also six feet tall. James tried to turn back to the door, but he couldn’t stop looking at the unusual string of noodle.

Chapter 2:The new door.By Karan TPS year 3

“My name is Mr Roman Dolphin, but you could call me Mr Roman,”he said, staring at James until he stepped back cautiously. “This is my emporium. What do you think of it?”asked Mr Roman. “I like it a lot,”replied James. “Do not touch the book of wonders until I think you are ready, but you are free to look around the emporium and touch other things,”shouted Mr Roman.

A few minutes later, Mr Roman left the room leaving behind his black and red top hat floating to the ground. James was left behind in the enormous emporium. He tried to find Mr Roman, but all he could see are millions of different coloured, shaped, and numbered doors. James wondered where do they all lead and who made them?

James looked left and right, he saw Mr Roman again. “I had a long thought. You may look in the book of wonders,”murmured Mr Roman. James dashed to the book and opened it. He saw pictures of people making Iron in the Iron age, a person named Pie looking at his computer screen, and an octopus above the clouds.

Later on, James had a rainbow pen that appeared magically in his hand. He started drawing spaghetti playing football with a meatball as the ball that no string of spaghetti could kick. There was a crowd of tomato sauce. It was spaghetti versus pasta.

BANG! James stopped drawing, put the pen down, and sprinted to where the sound happened. He opened the door and entered not a room, but something spectacular!

That spectacular thing that James saw was a crowd of tomato sauce that was cheering, spaghetti and pasta playing football with a meatball, and goals made out of noodles. It looked exactly like the drawing that James drew, but now it was real! James was so amazed so he got a chair, sat down, and watched the football game for all ninety minutes.