As soon as fantastic,fabulous Mrs Honey arrived into class seven, the familiar room immediately filled with cheers. Her face was filled with smiles as if she had a sugar rush.’Now class’ smiled Mrs Honey, ‘Who wants to have some fun!!’
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Well done Haniya, you have changed the mood of the paragraph completely. Can you remember what Pie said about using lots of adjectives meaning the same thing? Could you improve on the choice of adjectives you use to describe Mrs Honey?